List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I tend to buy things impulsively. I find it hard to resist buying items even if I don't need them, which is a bad habit.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I use an app called Promotional Timer to make a to-do list every day. This helps me stay organized and complete the tasks I set for myself.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lặp lại và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sửa lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because it can make them feel stressed. For example, when I see a long to-do list, I sometimes feel overwhelmed by the many tasks I have to complete.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Đồng thời, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I like both methods, but I prefer making to-do lists on my phone because it's easier to organize and update them. However, sometimes I write wish lists on paper because it feels more personal.

× No, I'm not.

✓ No, I don't.

The student incorrectly uses 'I'm not' as a response to 'Do you make a list when you shop?'. The correct response should be 'No, I don't' because the question is about an action, not a state of being.

× It a little bit shy when I have to say that I'm a materialist, I always make an impulsive shopping is a bad habit.

✓ I feel a little bit shy when I have to say that I'm a materialist. I always make impulsive purchases, which is a bad habit.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'It a little bit shy' is incorrect; the subject should be 'I' with the verb 'feel'. Also, 'make an impulsive shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make impulsive purchases' or 'go on impulsive shopping'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I believe that I cannot control my fears of missing out, so I just buy everything.

✓ I believe that I cannot control my fear of missing out, so I just buy everything.

The phrase 'fears of missing out' should be singular 'fear of missing out' as it is an uncountable feeling.

× I have an app called promotional timer so I always make a list of To Do List.

✓ I have an app called Promotional Timer, so I always make a To-Do list.

The phrase 'make a list of To Do List' is redundant and incorrect. 'Make a To-Do list' is the correct expression. Also, 'Promotional Timer' should be capitalized as a proper noun.

× Then I will try to finish on on the task that I give myself for in a day and that keep me on track.

✓ Then I try to finish the tasks that I give myself in a day, and that keeps me on track.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used after 'finish'. The correct phrase is 'finish the task'. Also, 'for in a day' is incorrect; it should be 'in a day'. Subject-verb agreement corrected from 'keep' to 'keeps'.

× Maybe because at some point making a list make finishing everything become more stressful.

✓ Maybe because at some point making a list makes finishing everything more stressful.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. Also, 'become' is unnecessary here.

× Like sometime I feel under under pressure when I look at my To Do List.

✓ Sometimes I feel under pressure when I look at my To-Do list.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The repeated 'under' is a mistake. 'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do list'.

× They are a wide arranged of things to do so it makes me stressed.

✓ There is a wide range of things to do, so it makes me stressed.

'They are' is incorrect; 'There is' is appropriate for 'a wide range'. 'Arranged' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a wide range of things'.

× It's really hard for me to take a side because I love both of them.

✓ It's really hard for me to choose a side because I love both of them.

The phrase 'take a side' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'choose a side'.

× So I I I do all why making A to do list in my form easier for me to control everything.

✓ So I do all my To-Do lists on my phone because it's easier for me to control everything.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'I do all why making A to do list in my form' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× Do a wish list in the paper make it easier?

✓ Does making a wish list on paper make it easier?

The original sentence is a question but lacks proper structure. 'Do a wish list in the paper make it easier?' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper auxiliary verb and preposition.