List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and covers the question, but it is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy items quickly and prevents me from forgetting important things. Nowadays, I prefer to use my phone to make the list since it's more convenient to carry than paper.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and contains some confusing phrases. Try to organize your ideas better and use clear sentences. Also, avoid unnecessary details and focus on answering the question directly.

Exemplo: Yes, as a homemaker, I usually make a mental list of tasks I need to complete each day. For example, in the morning, I plan to prepare breakfast for my family and then do household chores like cleaning.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use more precise vocabulary and structure your sentences better. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I think it depends on the person. Some people dislike making lists because they find it too time-consuming. Instead, they rely on their good memory to remember what they need to do or buy.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear and repetitive parts. Try to speak more clearly and avoid filler words. Also, organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them.

Exemplo: Nowadays, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and always with me. When I go grocery shopping, I simply open the list on my phone and check off the items I need to buy.

× It helps me to buy the things really really fast and it and I don't forget about something important I want to buy from my house for my house and it also saves my time usually.

✓ It helps me to buy things really, really fast and I don't forget something important I want to buy for my house, and it usually saves me time.

The original sentence contains redundant and awkward phrasing such as 'and it and I' and 'from my house for my house'. These disrupt the flow and clarity. Simplifying the sentence and removing repeated or misplaced words improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× Nowadays I used to make a list on my phone instead of paper as it's easy to carry.

✓ Nowadays I make a list on my phone instead of paper as it's easy to carry.

The phrase 'used to' indicates a past habit that no longer occurs, which conflicts with 'Nowadays' indicating the present. The correct form is simple present tense 'make' to express a current habit.

× Yes, right now I'm a homemaker and I don't make a list on any phone or people, but I make a list in my mind what the works I have to do next.

✓ Yes, right now I'm a homemaker and I don't make a list on any phone or paper, but I make a list in my mind of the work I have to do next.

The word 'people' is incorrect here; it should be 'paper' to refer to writing material. Also, 'what the works' is incorrect; it should be 'of the work' to indicate the tasks to be done.

× Like in the morning when I wake up what all I have to do like make breakfast for my kids, for myself and for my family and then I have to do the household other code shows like Google, like cleaning and every.

✓ Like in the morning when I wake up, I think about all I have to do, like making breakfast for my kids, for myself, and for my family, and then I have to do other household chores like cleaning and everything.

The phrase 'household other code shows like Google' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'other household chores like cleaning and everything' to correctly express the intended meaning. Also, 'make breakfast' should be 'making breakfast' to fit the gerund form after 'like'.

× It depends on person to person.

✓ It depends on person to person.

This sentence is missing the article 'the' before 'person to person'. The correct phrase is 'It depends on the person to person' or better 'It depends from person to person'. However, since 'depends on' is used, the correct phrase is 'It depends on the person.' or 'It depends from person to person.' The original phrase is incomplete.

× I think some people don't like to make less as they find it too hectic to make it.

✓ I think some people don't like to make lists as they find it too hectic to do so.

The word 'less' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to refer to making lists. Also, 'make it' is vague; 'do so' is clearer and more appropriate.

× They just remember the things you want to do.

✓ They just remember the things they want to do.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here because the subject is 'they'. It should be 'they' to maintain pronoun agreement.

× They don't find it need to make the list.

✓ They don't find it necessary to make a list.

The phrase 'find it need' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'find it necessary' or 'find it needed'. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is general.

× They just have a sharp memory so they remember everything they want to buy, all they want to do.

✓ They just have a sharp memory so they remember everything they want to buy and all they want to do.

The sentence lacks a conjunction between the two clauses. Adding 'and' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As I already discussed are nowadays due to the modern era and modern technology, it's really convenient to make a list on the phone 'cause that's the thing we always carry with us when we are going out.

✓ As I already discussed, nowadays due to the modern era and modern technology, it's really convenient to make a list on the phone because that's the thing we always carry with us when we go out.

The phrase 'are nowadays' is incorrect; it should be 'nowadays'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate. 'When we are going out' is better as 'when we go out' for simplicity.

× So whenever I'm in app, I have to do the grocery shopping at always came iPhone with it with with me and I've made the list in it.

✓ So whenever I have to do grocery shopping, I always carry my iPhone with me and I've made the list on it.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors like 'I'm in app', 'at always came iPhone with it with with me'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition and word order errors.

× I just browse through the list and then apply the things I want to buy.

✓ I just browse through the list and then buy the things I want to buy.

The verb 'apply' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'buy' to indicate purchasing items from the list.