ListPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes, I always do a shopping list because I will buy many things. And it can prevent me from forgetting by important items and it can save times and preventing from buying unnecessary things.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

I always make a list for my work because I'm the kind of person who likes to stay all night. Making a list help me remember all the tax I need to complete and which helps me, my productive Tian, make my work day run more smoothly.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Not everyone likes making list because some people prefer to rely on their memory mentally. For example, they might keep all their tasks in their mind instead of writing them down or typing them on computer. This way they feel more flexible.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

Yes, I prefer to make list on my phone because it is extremely convenient and efficient. For instance, I can quickly add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing the beast since I was carrying my phone with me. Moreover, some apps even allowed to say remind.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了主要观点,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“by important items”应为“important items”,“save times”应为“save time”,且句子结构略显重复。建议注意语法准确性,简洁表达,避免重复。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I buy many items. It helps me remember important things and saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如“help”应为“helps”,且“tax”可能是“tasks”的拼写错误。表达不够清晰,且有些词汇使用不当。建议加强语法准确性,使用恰当词汇,并使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I always make a list for my work because I tend to work late at night. Making a list helps me remember all the tasks I need to complete, which makes my workday run more smoothly.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答内容较好,但“making list”应为“making lists”,“on computer”应为“on a computer”。建议注意冠词使用和复数形式,提升语言准确性。

Exemplo: Not everyone likes making lists because some people prefer to rely on their memory. For example, they might keep all their tasks in their mind instead of writing them down or typing them on a computer. This way, they feel more flexible.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在多处语法和用词错误,如“make list”应为“make a list”,“losing the beast”应为“losing the list”,“allowed to say remind”表达不清。建议加强语法和词汇准确性,避免表达模糊。

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient and efficient. For example, I can quickly add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing the list since I always carry my phone. Moreover, some apps even allow me to set reminders.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I always do a shopping list because I will buy many things.

Yes, I always make a shopping list because I will buy many things.

这里的动词搭配错误,应该用动词make搭配list,而不是do。虽然这不是列表的单复数问题,但根据题目要求只纠正列表中类型的错误,此处不属于列表中的错误类型,故不纠正。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And it can prevent me from forgetting by important items and it can save times and preventing from buying unnecessary things.

And it can prevent me from forgetting important items, save time, and prevent buying unnecessary things.

这里存在介词使用错误和动词形式错误。'forgetting by important items'应为'forgetting important items','save times'应为'save time','preventing from buying'应为'prevent buying'。这些错误属于介词使用和动词形式问题,符合第11和第8类型。

Singular and plural issue

× Not everyone likes making list because some people prefer to rely on their memory mentally.

Not everyone likes making lists because some people prefer to rely on their memory mentally.

list应为复数lists,因为这里指的是一般的列表,符合单复数问题。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I prefer to make list on my phone because it is extremely convenient and efficient.

Yes, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is extremely convenient and efficient.

list应为复数lists,因为这里指的是一般的列表,符合单复数问题。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× For instance, I can quickly add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing the beast since I was carrying my phone with me.

For instance, I can quickly add or remove items anytime without worrying about losing the list since I am carrying my phone with me.

原句中'losing the beast'应为'losing the list',且时态应与上下文一致,'I was carrying'应为'I am carrying'。这里存在代词和词汇使用错误,符合第12类型。

Incorrect use of modal verbs

× Moreover, some apps even allowed to say remind.

Moreover, some apps even allow you to set reminders.

原句中'allowed to say remind'结构不正确,应该用allow sb. to do sth.结构,且动词时态应为一般现在时,符合第4类型。

Vocabulário

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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