List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop. I tend to buy things based on how I feel at the moment. For example, if I'm feeling happy, I might buy some clothes or food that I like.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good points but is hard to follow due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you, using linking words like 'especially' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It helps me stay organised, especially on busy days when I have many tasks to complete. For example, it ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use simple, correct sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. Also, they might find lists too restrictive or time-consuming to prepare.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite clear but could be improved by avoiding hesitation and adding more specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. For instance, when I'm in a public place, I can easily add items without carrying extra paper.

× No, no, I always go shopping depends and buy something depend on my. Feeling such as when I'm feel and I feel happy, I want to buy some food, clothes.

✓ No, no, I always go shopping depending and buy something depending on my feelings, such as when I feel happy, I want to buy some food and clothes.

The verb 'depend' should be in the '-ing' form 'depending' to correctly function as a gerund or present participle in this context. Also, 'feel' should be 'feelings' to correctly refer to emotions, and 'I'm feel' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× No, no, I always go shopping depends and buy something depend on my. Feeling such as when I'm feel and I feel happy, I want to buy some food, clothes.

✓ No, no, I always go shopping depending and buy something depending on my feelings, such as when I feel happy, I want to buy some food and clothes.

The phrase 'I'm feel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I feel' because 'feel' is a stative verb and does not take the auxiliary 'am' in present simple tense. Also, 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to refer to emotions generally.

× No, no, I always go shopping depends and buy something depend on my. Feeling such as when I'm feel and I feel happy, I want to buy some food, clothes.

✓ No, no, I always go shopping depending and buy something depending on my feelings, such as when I feel happy, I want to buy some food and clothes.

The phrase 'depend on my. Feeling' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive pronoun that should be followed by a noun without a full stop. It should be 'my feelings' to correctly express possession and plural noun usage.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. He could. It helps me stay organized especially on busy days when I have many times. To complete for example, I can make sure that I don't forget anything important, so I think make a list has me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized, especially on busy days when I have many tasks to complete. For example, I can make sure that I don't forget anything important, so I think making a list helps me.

The original sentences contain fragments and unclear phrases such as 'He could' and 'many times. To complete'. These have been corrected to form complete, coherent sentences. Also, 'make a list has me' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list helps me' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. He could. It helps me stay organized especially on busy days when I have many times. To complete for example, I can make sure that I don't forget anything important, so I think make a list has me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized, especially on busy days when I have many tasks to complete. For example, I can make sure that I don't forget anything important, so I think making a list helps me.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrectly used instead of 'It' to refer to 'a list'. Pronouns must agree with their antecedents in number and gender; here, 'list' is an object and should be referred to as 'it'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work. He could. It helps me stay organized especially on busy days when I have many times. To complete for example, I can make sure that I don't forget anything important, so I think make a list has me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized, especially on busy days when I have many tasks to complete. For example, I can make sure that I don't forget anything important, so I think making a list helps me.

The phrase 'so I think make a list has me' is incorrect. The gerund form 'making' should be used after 'think' to indicate the action, and 'has me' should be 'helps me' to correctly express assistance.

× I think it depends on the news because, uh, most, uh, some people who can control there. Oh can control a logic test they. Conceded that they told. How to make a list?

✓ I think it depends on the news because, uh, some people who can control themselves can logically decide how to make a list.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrectly used instead of 'themselves' to refer reflexively to 'people'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and fragmented; it has been corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I think it depends on the news because, uh, most, uh, some people who can control there. Oh can control a logic test they. Conceded that they told. How to make a list?

✓ I think it depends on the news because, uh, some people who can control themselves can logically decide how to make a list.

The reflexive pronoun 'there' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' to indicate that the people control their own actions.

× I think it depends on the news because, uh, most, uh, some people who can control there. Oh can control a logic test they. Conceded that they told. How to make a list?

✓ I think it depends on the news because, uh, some people who can control themselves can logically decide how to make a list.

The phrase 'a logic test they. Conceded that they told.' is unclear and likely incorrect pronoun and word usage. It has been corrected to 'can logically decide' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's really convenient for me when I'm. Uh, in a public place and I can easy to make a list.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's really convenient for me when I'm in a public place and I can easily make a list.

The phrase 'I can easy to make a list' is incorrect. The adverb 'easily' should be used instead of the adjective 'easy' to modify the verb 'make'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and fluency.