List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from forgetting items.'

Exemplo: I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. For example, last week I bought everything I needed without forgetting anything, which saved me time.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, 'Yes, I make a list for my work every day because it helps me organize tasks and ensures I don't forget important duties.'

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. This helps me organize my tasks efficiently, and as a result, I complete my work on time without missing anything.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or unnecessary, and they prefer to remember things naturally.'

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring. For instance, my friend prefers to remember tasks in her mind rather than writing them down.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I never forget my list when I go out.'

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can check my list anytime and never forget what I need to do.

× When it comes to stop some things, I always make list because I making a list is good for me because I don't.

✓ When it comes to stopping some things, I always make a list because making a list is good for me.

The phrase 'comes to' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'stop' should be 'stopping'. Also, 'I making a list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. Additionally, 'make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article.

× When it comes to stop some things, I always make list because I making a list is good for me because I don't.

✓ When it comes to stopping some things, I always make a list because making a list is good for me.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. The phrase should be 'make a list' instead of 'make list'.

× I don't. I never forget how, what, what things I saw I'm going to stop and. That's right.

✓ I never forget what things I saw and what I am going to stop. That's right.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to clearly express the idea. 'I don't.' is incomplete and should be removed. The phrase 'how, what, what things' is confusing and should be simplified to 'what things'. Also, 'I'm going to stop and.' is incomplete and should be completed or rephrased.

× I always make list of what I what I do and it helps me remember something and I never forget that what I do so that yeah.

✓ I always make a list of what I do and it helps me remember things, so I never forget what I do.

Again, 'make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is a countable noun. Also, the sentence is repetitive and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× William I think it's in my daily routine.

✓ Well, I think it's part of my daily routine.

'William' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'Well'. The sentence needs to be corrected for clarity and proper expression.

× And then make a list is good for May and it it really does work for.

✓ And then making a list is good for me and it really does work.

'Make a list' should be 'making a list' to function as a noun phrase here. Also, 'May' is a typo and should be 'me'. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× I think, uh, some people doesn't like making unleashed because then I don't know so much,

✓ I think, uh, some people don't like making lists because I don't know why,

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'making unleashed' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'.

× but I think I don't know why it didn't different because they they never know been feet of this making a list.

✓ but I think I don't know why it's different because they have never been used to making a list.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'didn't different' is incorrect; it should be 'it's different'. 'never know been feet of' is incorrect and should be 'have never been used to'. The sentence needs to be rephrased for clarity.

× Oh, I almost proposed to make a list on my phone is specially N so whenever I never forget my phone whenever I'm going outside.

✓ Oh, I almost prefer to make a list on my phone especially so I never forget it when I go outside.

'proposed to make' is incorrect here; 'prefer to make' fits better. 'specially N' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'especially' is appropriate. 'whenever I never forget my phone' is awkward; it should be 'so I never forget it'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× So making up for making a plan list in my phone is much much better for me so I always. Before his job.

✓ So making a list on my phone is much better for me, so I always do it before my job.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'making up for making a plan list' is incorrect and should be 'making a list'. 'Before his job' is unclear and should be 'before my job'. The sentence needs to be complete and clear.