ListPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping. It can help me to avoid some unnecessary things.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, every day when I go to work I make list. And I always put the important things. In the first. It helps me a lot.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Maybe they think that the list. Is unnecessary for them.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see them anytime.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但句子结构较简单,且缺少连接词使内容显得有些断裂。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”来增强句子连贯性,并丰富细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和断句问题,影响表达的流畅性。建议注意句子完整性,使用连接词如“and”或“so”连接句子,并改正语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list every day before work, and I always put the most important tasks first, so it helps me stay organized.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答过于简短且有语法错误,缺少具体细节。建议扩展理由,使用完整句子,并加入连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Maybe some people think that making lists is unnecessary because they prefer to remember things mentally or find lists restrictive.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答较为自然且有理由支持,但“them”指代不明确,建议使用更具体的词汇,并适当丰富细节。

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can access it anytime and easily update or delete items.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, every day when I go to work I make list.

Yes, every day when I go to work I make a list.

这里缺少冠词“a”,因为“list”是可数名词,单数形式前需要加冠词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And I always put the important things. In the first.

And I always put the important things first.

“put the important things first”是固定表达,不能拆开成两句,且“in the first”用法错误,应直接用“first”作副词。

Sentence structure errors

× Maybe they think that the list. Is unnecessary for them.

Maybe they think that the list is unnecessary for them.

句子被错误地拆成两句,导致结构不完整,应合并为一句完整的陈述句。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see them anytime.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see it anytime.

“list”是单数名词,代词应使用单数“it”,而不是复数“them”。

Vocabulário

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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