List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by avoiding fragmented sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer explanations.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a small list for each category when I plan to go grocery shopping. For example, I write down the items I need from the store to stay organized and avoid forgetting anything.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by combining sentences and adding linking words to make it more fluent and natural. Also, provide a brief reason why making lists is effective.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I make a list of tasks I need to complete for my job because it helps me stay organized and ensures I finish everything on time.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use clear and complete sentences with appropriate linking words. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to complete their tasks spontaneously, believing it makes them more flexible.

Sugestão: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Exemplo: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using apps on my phone because they allow me to easily update and organize my lists.

× I usually make a small list for each category, for example when I am planning to go to groceries.

✓ I usually make a small list for each category, for example when I am planning to go grocery shopping.

The phrase 'go to groceries' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go grocery shopping' to indicate the activity of shopping for groceries.

× I start to write down a list. About the things that I need from the store.

✓ I start to write down a list about the things that I need from the store.

The original sentence is split incorrectly into two fragments. Combining them into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it's me, it will make it.

✓ So it's me who will make it.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Using 'who will make it' clarifies the subject performing the action.

× I make a list for the things that I need to achieve for my job.

✓ I make a list of the things that I need to achieve for my job.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'list of' is the correct collocation when referring to items included in a list.

× Some people are too lazy to a prepare their list for a, for example their work or.

✓ Some people are too lazy to prepare their list, for example, for their work or...

The article 'a' before 'prepare' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs proper punctuation and structure.

× For shopping list.

✓ for their shopping list.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb; adding 'their' and connecting it properly completes the thought.

× They believe it's better to just to spontaneously complete their task.

✓ They believe it's better to just spontaneously complete their tasks.

The phrase 'just to spontaneously' is incorrect; 'just spontaneously' is correct. Also, 'task' should be plural to match 'their'.

× I used to make a list using paper bin, now the.

✓ I used to make a list using paper, but now...

The phrase 'paper bin' is incorrect; it should be 'paper'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs proper conjunction and continuation.

× I love developing developed my list and add some technical way to it, so I started to use apps for IT lists.

✓ I love developing my list and adding some technical features to it, so I started to use apps for my lists.

The phrase 'developing developed' is redundant and incorrect. 'Add some technical way' is unclear; 'adding some technical features' is clearer. 'Apps for IT lists' is unclear; 'apps for my lists' is more appropriate.