List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more concise and structured. Avoid repetition such as "you you" and phrases like "literally" which are overused here. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "so" to improve coherence. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me save time and prevents me from forgetting important items. For example, last week I quickly bought everything I needed without wandering around the store.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many grammatical errors and incomplete sentences, which affect understanding. Try to organise your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Also, avoid filler phrases and focus on expressing your ideas clearly and naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list to organise my work because it helps me plan my tasks efficiently. This way, I avoid forgetting important duties and can manage my time better.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and informal language. Avoid phrases like "according to me" and "like" used unnecessarily. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words such as "because" or "however". Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition of words like "literally".

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. However, I think lists actually save time by helping you stay organised, especially when shopping.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear preference with reasons, using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas are fully expressed. Also, use appropriate vocabulary and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient; I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check or update my list while shopping.

× So yes, it's easier when you make a list before going for a shopping 'cause when you go into the shopping mall it just literally saves your time.

✓ So yes, it's easier when you make a list before going shopping because when you go into the shopping mall it literally saves your time.

The phrase 'going for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping'. The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund 'shopping' without the preposition 'for'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in formal speech.

× And then you you can't be roaming around the aisles like you need to have something but you forgot the end.

✓ And then you can't be roaming around the aisles when you need to have something but you forgot it in the end.

The phrase 'forgot the end' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot it in the end'. Also, 'like you need to have something' is better expressed as 'when you need to have something' to indicate the condition.

× But The thing is, the best way to do shopping is just to make a list to save.

✓ But the thing is, the best way to do shopping is just to make a list to save time.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'time' after 'save' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× I could have a idea that will I need to do so rather wasting time to think that I need this thing to do This thing needs doing.

✓ I could have an idea of what I need to do, so rather than wasting time thinking about what I need to do, I can follow the list.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'a idea' should be 'an idea' (article error), 'will I need to do' is incorrect word order, and 'rather wasting time to think' should be 'rather than wasting time thinking'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Expect to have a seat. Sorry it's bad to have a late so equipped literally saves my.

✓ Sorry, I am late. Being prepared literally saves me time.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Expect to have a seat' and 'so equipped literally saves my' do not make sense. Rephrasing to 'Being prepared literally saves me time' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× According to me they think like if they do make a lace it literally waste their time but it's opposite when you made a list you can literally save your time in shopping mall so yeah.

✓ In my opinion, they think that if they make a list, it literally wastes their time, but it's the opposite; when you make a list, you can literally save your time in the shopping mall.

'According to me' is better expressed as 'In my opinion'. 'Make a lace' is a mispronunciation of 'make a list'. 'Waste' should be 'wastes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'It's opposite' should be 'it's the opposite'. 'Made' should be 'make' to maintain present tense consistency.

× It doesn't matter where you make your list, but papers actually we don't have 'cause nowadays we got certain items to carry in her hand when we're walking, when we going to certain shopping.

✓ It doesn't matter where you make your list, but we don't actually have paper lists because nowadays we carry certain items in our hands when we're walking or going shopping.

'Papers actually we don't have' is awkward; rephrased for clarity. 'Her hand' is incorrect pronoun; should be 'our hands' to match the subject 'we'. 'When we going to certain shopping' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'when we're walking or going shopping'.

× So it's a good idea, 'cause everybody got phone in their hand.

✓ So it's a good idea because everybody has a phone in their hand.

'Everybody got phone' is incorrect; should be 'everybody has a phone'. Also, 'in their hand' is acceptable but 'in their hands' is more common since people have two hands.

× But if you're making on pay.

✓ But if you're making it on paper.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Likely intended to say 'But if you're making it on paper.' The word 'pay' is a mishearing or typo for 'paper'.