List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your habit and reasons, using correct grammar and linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. It helps me buy everything I need and avoid unnecessary purchases, so I don't have to return to the shop later.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words and complete your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists at work because, as a nurse, I have many patients and tasks to manage simultaneously. Making a list helps me organise my duties and ensures I complete everything on time.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors and irrelevant information. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they believe their memory is strong enough to remember everything. They also find list-making time-consuming and prefer to be spontaneous in their daily activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and environmentally friendly. Since I always carry my phone, it's easy to add or check items without wasting paper.

× Since I have a memory like a sieve, I prefer to make Lee make a list because it's a helps me to buy all things and also it helps me to stay organized an ensure that I don't buy unnecessary items and it's a ensure that I don't need to come back to the shop.

✓ Since I have a memory like a sieve, I prefer to make a list because it helps me to buy all things and also it helps me to stay organized and ensure that I don't buy unnecessary items and it ensures that I don't need to come back to the shop.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before uncountable or plural nouns and before verbs. For example, 'a helps' and 'a ensure' are incorrect. The correct form is without 'a' before verbs: 'it helps', 'it ensures'. Also, 'an ensure' is incorrect; 'and ensure' is correct. Removing the incorrect articles improves grammatical accuracy.

× So it's necessary for us to make list because, uh, we have to do lots of things simultaneously.

✓ So it's necessary for us to make a list because, uh, we have to do lots of things simultaneously.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Omitting the article before singular countable nouns is incorrect. Adding 'a' before 'list' corrects the sentence.

× So it's help us an ensure that we do all of them in the due time and if we don't have a list.

✓ So it helps us and ensures that we do all of them in due time if we don't have a list.

The phrase 'in the due time' is incorrect; the definite article 'the' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'in due time'. Also, 'it's help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the subject. 'An ensure' is incorrect; it should be 'and ensures'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Some, some of people, uh, think that they have a memory like an elephant.

✓ Some people, uh, think that they have a memory like an elephant.

The phrase 'some of people' is incorrect; the correct form is 'some people'. The pronoun 'some' can directly modify plural countable nouns without 'of' unless followed by a determiner. Removing 'of' corrects the sentence.

× So they already call of all of item and they don't prefer to have a list because they believe that is really time consuming for them.

✓ So they already call off all of the items and they don't prefer to have a list because they believe that it is really time-consuming for them.

The phrase 'call of all of item' is incorrect. It should be 'call off all of the items' or better 'call off all items'. 'Item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things. Also, 'that is' should be 'that it is' for clarity. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× And then they're like to live in present time and buy lots of thing and for their career plan.

✓ And then they like to live in the present time and buy lots of things for their career plan.

The phrase 'they're like to live' is incorrect; it should be 'they like to live'. 'They're' is a contraction of 'they are' and does not fit here. Also, 'present time' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'lots of'. Removing 'and' before 'for their career plan' improves sentence flow.

× Nowadays, most people prefer to go green and I'm not an exception. When we use paper, we harm the environment. So it's not a widely to use a paper.

✓ Nowadays, most people prefer to go green and I'm not an exception. When we use paper, we harm the environment. So it's not widely accepted to use paper.

The phrase 'it's not a widely to use a paper' is incorrect. 'Widely' is an adverb and cannot be used as a noun. The phrase should be 'it's not widely accepted to use paper'. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect when referring to paper in general; 'paper' is uncountable and does not need an article here.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I, uh, I carry my phone all of the time and it's really comfortable for me to write on.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I, uh, carry my phone all the time and it's really comfortable for me to write on it.

The phrase 'all of the time' is acceptable but 'all the time' is more natural. Also, the sentence ends with a preposition 'on' which is acceptable in spoken English but adding 'it' clarifies the object of 'write on'. Removing the repeated 'I' improves fluency.