List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I'm Are you ready to make a shopping list'. Try to start directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within five sentences.

Exemplo: I usually make a shopping list when I need to buy groceries for one or two weeks because it's hard to remember everything. However, if I'm just buying a few essential items, I don't bother making a list.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward phrases like 'make a planning' and 'overview of my roots'. Try to use correct expressions and provide specific reasons why making a list helps you. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a plan for my work because it helps me organise my tasks and manage my time effectively. This way, I can follow a daily routine and complete my work more efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions such as 'have everything in their heart' and 'more spontaneous type of person'. Try to express your ideas more naturally and provide clearer reasons with linking words.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. Others are more spontaneous and enjoy going with the flow rather than planning everything in advance.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and combine sentences using linking words for better flow.

Exemplo: I prefer to make grocery lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry around. However, for important resolutions like New Year goals, I write them on paper since it helps me focus and reflect more.

× I'm Are you ready to make a shopping list if I plan to buy one or two essential products from supermarket?

✓ I make a shopping list if I plan to buy one or two essential products from the supermarket.

The original sentence is a run-on and contains an incorrect phrase 'I'm Are you ready'. The sentence should be a clear statement about making a list when planning to buy essentials. Also, 'supermarket' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× if I plan to buy one or two essential products from supermarket?

✓ if I plan to buy one or two essential products from the supermarket?

In English, singular countable nouns like 'supermarket' require an article. Here, 'the' is appropriate because it refers to a specific supermarket.

× I tend to make a planning for my work in general because it can give me a good overview of my roots, work daily like a work day routine as well as it helps me structure my day better.

✓ I tend to make a plan for my work in general because it can give me a good overview of my routes, work daily like a workday routine, as well as help me structure my day better.

'Planning' is an uncountable noun or a verb form; here, 'a plan' is correct as a countable noun. 'Roots' should be 'routes' if referring to paths or schedules. 'Work day' should be one word 'workday'. Also, 'helps me' should be parallel with 'can give me', so 'help me' is better.

× Some people, they may have everything in their heart so they don't need to make a list.

✓ Some people may have everything in their heart, so they don't need to make a list.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'Some people'. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without repeating the subject.

× However, I think more so people who don't like make a list because there are more spontaneous type of person they enjoy follow the flow.

✓ However, I think more people don't like to make a list because they are more spontaneous types of person who enjoy following the flow.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction and verb forms. 'More so people who don't like make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'more people don't like to make a list'. 'There are more spontaneous type of person' should be plural 'types of person'. 'They enjoy follow' should be 'who enjoy following' to use the correct verb form after 'enjoy'.

× Well if it's for shopping, definitely I will make the grocery list on my phone.

✓ Well, if it's for shopping, I will definitely make the grocery list on my phone.

The adverb 'definitely' is better placed before the main verb 'make' for natural English word order. Also, a comma after 'Well' improves clarity.

× Because it's just easy to carry it around.

✓ Because it's just easy to carry around.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary here because 'carry around' already implies carrying the list. Removing 'it' makes the sentence more natural.

× However, if I need to make a resolution for, you know, new year or new week, then I tend to make it on the paper because it can give me more time to read.

✓ However, if I need to make a resolution for, you know, the new year or a new week, then I tend to make it on paper because it gives me more time to read.

'New year' requires the definite article 'the' as it is a specific time. 'New week' should have the indefinite article 'a' as it is any new week. 'On the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, 'can give' is better as 'gives' for present simple tense here.