Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No, I don't make a list 1. When my when I show pink because I am ENFP so I like to go to some things.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Sometimes I will make a list for my work, because this work is very important, I must do it best. And sometimes I usually don't make a list for my work because this work is not very important.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think some people don't like make. List. Big 'cause.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
And when I was a student, I like. Make I like to make a list on paper because students don't. Don't have the ability to use from where I am university student. I rarely make a list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 你的回答不够连贯,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议回答时先直接回答问题,然后用简洁的句子说明原因,避免重复和语法错误。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I feel like.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答较为清晰,但句子结构简单且重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并丰富细节。
Exemplo: Sometimes I make a list for my work when the tasks are important because it helps me stay organized. However, for less important tasks, I usually don't make a list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误严重,无法表达完整意思。建议先给出直接回答,再用简单句子说明原因。
Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 回答表达混乱,语法错误多,逻辑不清。建议先明确表达偏好,再说明原因,避免重复和不连贯。
Exemplo: When I was a student, I preferred making lists on paper because I wasn't very good at using phone apps. Now, I rarely make lists on my phone.
× No, I don't make a list 1. When my when I show pink because I am ENFP so I like to go to some things.
✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I am ENFP and I like to go to some places.
句子结构混乱,存在重复和无意义的词语。应简化句子,明确表达意思。建议去掉多余部分,保持句子通顺。
× Sometimes I will make a list for my work, because this work is very important, I must do it best.
✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work because this work is very important, and I must do it well.
“will”在此处不合适,表达习惯动作用一般现在时;“do it best”应改为“do it well”,因为“best”是最高级,需有比较对象。
× And sometimes I usually don't make a list for my work because this work is not very important.
✓ Sometimes I don't make a list for my work because this work is not very important.
“sometimes”和“usually”重复使用,语义冲突,应去掉其中一个。
× I think some people don't like make. List. Big 'cause.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they are big.
“don't like make”应改为“don't like making”,动词后需用动名词形式;“List. Big 'cause.”语句不完整,应合并并补充完整。
× And when I was a student, I like. Make I like to make a list on paper because students don't. Don't have the ability to use from where I am university student.
✓ When I was a student, I liked to make lists on paper because students didn't have the ability to use phones. Now I am a university student.
时态不一致,过去时应用liked;句子断裂且表达不清,应重组句子,明确表达意思。
× I rarely make a list on my phone.
✓ I rarely make lists on my phone.
“list”应使用复数形式“lists”,因为这里指的是习惯性行为的复数情况。