List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and fragmented. Try to make your sentences complete and connect your ideas smoothly using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember everything I need to buy. I cross off each item as I put it in my basket, which keeps me organized and saves time.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has incomplete sentences. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your opinion. Also, avoid unnecessary words and keep your answer natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list of tasks I want to complete on weekends. Although I don't always follow it strictly, the list motivates me to stay organized and be productive.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit fragmented. Try to connect your ideas smoothly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously. Making a list can feel restrictive since it requires completing tasks by specific times, which some find stressful.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reasons using linking words. Make sure your sentences are complete and coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can easily edit them and access them anytime. However, I sometimes use paper lists as well, but digital lists are more convenient for me.

× I make a really long list when I shop so that I could. Take off the number every time I walk past as a thing that I need.

✓ I make a really long list when I shop so that I can take off the number every time I walk past an item that I need.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'So that I could.' is incomplete and should be connected to the following clause. Also, 'as a thing that I need' is unclear and should be replaced with 'an item that I need' for clarity.

× I could put in my basket and take it off so that. There's something. To remind me of. So that when I go.

✓ I can put it in my basket and take it off the list so that there's something to remind me when I go shopping.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. They need to be combined into a coherent sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I make a list for. What I need to do in the weekends?

✓ I make a list of what I need to do on the weekends.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly uses a question mark. 'For' should be 'of' to indicate the content of the list, and 'in the weekends' should be 'on the weekends' as the correct preposition for days.

× I make a really long list when I shop so that I could.

✓ I make a really long list when I shop so that I can.

'Could' is past tense modal verb and does not fit the present context. 'Can' is the correct modal verb to express ability in the present.

× I make a list for. What I need to do in the weekends?

✓ I make a list of what I need to do on the weekends.

'For' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition to indicate the content of the list is 'of'. Also, 'in the weekends' should be 'on the weekends' because 'on' is used for days and periods like weekends.

× It to be honest it doesn't really work but I try to make it work and it's doing me a good. Favor.

✓ To be honest, it doesn't really work, but I try to make it work and it's doing me a good favor.

The original sentence has misplaced words and unnecessary periods causing fragmentation. 'It to be honest' should be 'To be honest,' and the sentence should be continuous without unnecessary breaks.

× It's giving me motivation. Anne.

✓ It's giving me motivation.

'Anne' appears to be an error or unrelated word and should be removed for clarity.

× They don't wanna do things by a certain time, they want to do things their own way.

✓ They don't want to do things by a certain time; they want to do things their own way.

'Wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, the sentence should be separated properly with a semicolon or period to avoid a run-on sentence.

× So by making a list it means you have to do this and finish this. Bye. That time and that day.

✓ So, by making a list, it means you have to do this and finish it by that time and that day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains 'Bye' which is incorrect. The sentence should be combined and 'Bye' replaced with 'by' to indicate time.

× I actually I prefer. Phone, but I do often use on paper.

✓ Actually, I prefer my phone, but I often use paper as well.

The original sentence is fragmented and missing articles. 'Phone' should be 'my phone' and 'use on paper' should be 'use paper'.

× In the same time on phone is better because. It shows me I could fix it.

✓ At the same time, using my phone is better because it allows me to fix it.

'In the same time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'At the same time'. The sentence is fragmented and should be combined for clarity.

× I could. But get it anytime I want, same as paper, but it's not.

✓ I can access it anytime I want, unlike paper, which is not as convenient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined and clarified to express the intended meaning properly.