List— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
I'm a person who preferred to shopping on line modern shopping in a physical shop, so I think that I don't need any list about this problem because I only buy what I want in other moment.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I'm not usually making any list from a book because I prefer to work by son my mood and I think in my invites me more motivated and productive then. Then work on a streak plate.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think this because they are unrestrained people like me. I really had to work on a street, plan any strict plane. So I think that they want to do what they want. NO. According.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Yeah, as I have said. I am a people who like freedom, so I don't have any list in my life. I want to do everything by some my moods in my want.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Exemplo: I usually shop online rather than in physical stores, so I don't make a shopping list. I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I need them.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Exemplo: I usually don't make lists for my work because I prefer to work according to my mood. This way, I feel more motivated and productive.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, đồng thời giải thích rõ lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer freedom and flexibility. They want to do things spontaneously without strict plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về sở thích của mình, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Exemplo: I don't usually make lists, but if I do, I prefer using my phone because it's convenient and always with me.
Gramática
× I'm a person who preferred to shopping on line modern shopping in a physical shop, so I think that I don't need any list about this problem because I only buy what I want in other moment.
✓ I'm a person who prefers shopping online rather than shopping in a physical shop, so I think that I don't need any list for this because I only buy what I want at the moment.
The phrase 'preferred to shopping' is incorrect because 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to' or by 'to' plus the base verb. Also, 'on line' should be 'online'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× I'm not usually making any list from a book because I prefer to work by son my mood and I think in my invites me more motivated and productive then. Then work on a streak plate.
✓ I don't usually make any list from a book because I prefer to work according to my mood, and I think it makes me more motivated and productive then. Then I work on a strict plan.
The phrase 'I'm not usually making' is incorrect; the simple present tense 'I don't usually make' is appropriate for habitual actions. 'By son my mood' is unclear and corrected to 'according to my mood'. 'In my invites me' is incorrect and changed to 'it makes me'. 'Streak plate' is corrected to 'strict plan' for meaning.
× I think this because they are unrestrained people like me. I really had to work on a street, plan any strict plane. So I think that they want to do what they want. NO. According.
✓ I think this is because they are unrestrained people like me. I really hate to work on a strict plan. So I think that they want to do what they want, no restrictions.
The sentence has unclear conjunctions and phrases. 'Had to work on a street, plan any strict plane' is corrected to 'hate to work on a strict plan' to convey meaning. 'NO. According.' is unclear and changed to 'no restrictions' to complete the thought.
× Yeah, as I have said. I am a people who like freedom, so I don't have any list in my life. I want to do everything by some my moods in my want.
✓ Yeah, as I have said, I am a person who likes freedom, so I don't have any list in my life. I want to do everything according to my moods and my wants.
'I am a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so 'person' is correct. 'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject. 'By some my moods in my want' is incorrect and changed to 'according to my moods and my wants' for clarity and correctness.
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