List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to form a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed, which saved me time and prevented me from forgetting anything.

Sugestão: Your response lacks clarity and contains many grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain how making lists helps your productivity. Be specific about how it benefits you and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. This helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently. As a result, I feel more productive and learn new things through my daily activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence explaining why some people avoid lists, then provide specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and prefer to keep things simple. However, this can be a drawback since lists save time and help avoid forgetting important tasks.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why using specific reasons and linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. Unlike paper lists, digital lists are easy to update and carry anywhere, which helps me stay organized.

× Whenever I go I used to go outside and do shopping, I usually make a list becauses it.

✓ Whenever I go outside to do shopping, I usually make a list because it

The phrase 'I used to go' incorrectly mixes past habitual tense with present context. Since the question is about current habits, 'I used to go' should be replaced with 'I go outside to do shopping'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× Always help me from. Not forgetting things and remembering things that what I have to bring and what have to brought from.

✓ It always helps me not to forget things and to remember what I have to bring and what I have to buy.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Always help me from.' is incomplete. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence using proper verb forms and conjunctions.

× what have to brought from.

✓ what I have to bring from.

The phrase 'have to brought' incorrectly uses the past participle 'brought' instead of the base form 'bring' after 'have to'. Modal verbs like 'have to' should be followed by the base form of the verb.

× It's like it's type A. Is staples To Do List that I do in my whole day what I have to do and that always make my day productive an I always learn many things after doing this and yes I do make make.

✓ It's like a type A Staples To-Do List that I use throughout my day to organize what I have to do. It always makes my day productive, and I always learn many things after doing this. Yes, I do make lists.

The original sentence is run-on and lacks clarity. It needs to be broken into multiple sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing. 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that'. Repetition 'make make' is corrected to 'make lists'.

× So that's the that's the only reason I guess that they don't make list, but it's I know for drawback for them because I feel like that it saved times it says.

✓ So that's the only reason, I guess, that they don't make lists, but I know it's a drawback for them because I feel like it saves time.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect conjunction use. 'but it's I know for drawback' is incorrect; it should be 'but I know it's a drawback'. 'saved times it says' is incorrect; 'saves time' is the correct present tense form.

× I always make a list in my phone because it's handy to keep an.

✓ I always make a list on my phone because it's handy to keep.

The correct preposition for using a device is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'keep an' is incomplete and should be omitted or completed properly.

× I always have my phone with me, I don't carry papers and I don't carry any other selves to make a list and and other things but it is very handy to watch informed that what I have to.

✓ I always have my phone with me; I don't carry papers or anything else to make a list or other things, but it is very handy to stay informed about what I have to do.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear phrases like 'any other selves' and 'watch informed that what I have to'. These are corrected to proper expressions and sentence structure for clarity.