List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage like 'shot' instead of 'shop'. Try to make your sentences concise and directly answer the question with supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to remember the items I need. However, sometimes I might forget something if I don't write it down.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Try to avoid grammatical errors and be more specific about how the list helps you. Also, use correct plural forms and clearer explanations.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work using the notes app on my phone. This helps me organize tasks by days, so I can remember what I need to do each day effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain clearly why some people dislike making lists. Avoid fragmented sentences and be specific.

Exemplo: I think some people consider making lists a waste of time because writing everything down can be time-consuming, and they prefer to rely on memory instead.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas in full sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on the main reason for your choice.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me. This way, I can easily check my notes anytime without carrying extra paper.

× No, I don't make a list when I shot.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop.

The word 'shot' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'shop' in the present tense to match the question about current habits.

× Becauses I used to remember the things which I have to buy, so I went to the shop.

✓ Because I used to remember the things which I have to buy, I go to the shop.

The word 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'Because'. Also, 'so' is unnecessary and the tense should be consistent with present habits, so 'went' is changed to 'go'.

× I go to the shop and I buy and pick the things.

✓ I go to the shop and buy the things.

The phrase 'buy and pick the things' is redundant and awkward; simplifying to 'buy the things' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× That I want to buy.

✓ Those are the things I want to buy.

The sentence fragment 'That I want to buy' lacks a subject and verb; it is corrected to a complete sentence for clarity.

× I have to remember so much things.

✓ I have to remember so many things.

'Things' is countable, so 'many' should be used instead of 'much'.

× Like there is an app in my mobile which is called notes and I used to write like day one, day 2, day three and in this way I remember what they have to do at that time and what I have to do at another time.

✓ There is an app on my mobile called Notes, and I write things like day one, day two, day three. In this way, I remember what I have to do at each time.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to apps on a mobile device. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and tense consistency.

× I think some people. Consider it as a waste of time becausde.

✓ I think some people consider it a waste of time because

The period after 'people' is incorrect; it should be a continuous sentence. 'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, 'consider it as' should be 'consider it'.

× As you write so many things in it, there will be a time wastage and people don't want to waste your time.

✓ As you write so many things in it, it wastes time and people don't want to waste their time.

'Time wastage' is awkward; 'it wastes time' is clearer. Also, 'your time' should be 'their time' to match the subject 'people'.

× As there is advanced technology in the world nowadays, so I prefer to make it on my phone.

✓ As there is advanced technology in the world nowadays, I prefer to make it on my phone.

Using both 'As' and 'so' together is redundant; one conjunction is sufficient.

× Because. There are two goal you have a phone in your hand and we just open your notes and you will just. Remind what you wrote in your notes and you just suddenly see what.

✓ Because there are two goals: you have a phone in your hand, and you can just open your notes to remind yourself what you wrote.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They are combined and rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.