List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answers more grammatically correct and fluent. Use complete sentences and avoid filler words like 'like'. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words such as 'because' or 'if'.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop, especially if I need to buy many items for the kitchen or pharmacy. However, if I only need two or three things, I don't bother making a list because it's easier to remember them.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and coherence. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas in a logical order.

Exemplo: No, I don't make a list for my work because I am a messy person and I often forget to do the tasks I put on the list. Therefore, making a list doesn't work well for me.

Sugestão: Use formal language instead of contractions like 'cause'. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it can be hard to follow them strictly. Also, they prefer to be more flexible, but lists do not allow much flexibility.

Sugestão: Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid unnecessary pauses. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is always with me, and I can easily check the list anytime and anywhere.

× Are usually do make a list.

✓ I usually make a list.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and auxiliary verb usage. The correct structure for expressing habitual actions is subject + adverb + main verb. Here, 'I usually make a list' is the proper form.

× For grocery and pharmacy if there is like a lot of stuff.

✓ For groceries and pharmacy, if there are a lot of things.

The sentence lacks proper structure and plural forms. 'Groceries' is plural, and 'there are' is needed for plural subjects. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here.

× That I have to buy.

✓ That I have to buy.

This fragment is incomplete and should be connected to the previous sentence for clarity. However, as a standalone, it is a fragment and not a complete sentence.

× For the kitchen food and stuff.

✓ For kitchen food and other items.

The phrase is incomplete and informal. 'Kitchen food and other items' is clearer and more grammatically correct.

× But if it's. Two or three things.

✓ But if it's two or three things.

The period after 'it's' is incorrect and breaks the sentence unnaturally. It should be a continuous sentence.

× I tried before to make a list.

✓ I have tried before to make a list.

The present perfect tense 'have tried' is more appropriate to indicate past experience relevant to the present.

× I am a messy person, so I do stuff.

✓ I am a messy person, so I do things carelessly.

'Do stuff' is informal and vague. 'Do things carelessly' clarifies the meaning and improves formality.

× Like I miss you way.

✓ Like I miss my way.

The phrase 'miss you way' is incorrect. It should be 'miss my way' to indicate losing track or forgetting steps.

× Oh. Like if I do the list, I don't do this stuff, I put in the list.

✓ If I make a list, I don't do the things I put on the list.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make a list' is the correct phrase, and the sentence should be combined for clarity.

× I don't know my brain.

✓ I don't understand my brain.

The phrase 'I don't know my brain' is incorrect. 'I don't understand my brain' better expresses confusion about one's own thoughts.

× 'Cause it's hard sometimes to follow a list.

✓ Because it's sometimes hard to follow a list.

'Cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'Because' in formal speech. Also, 'sometimes hard' is a better word order.

× And people may be like to be flexible more.

✓ And people may like to be more flexible.

The phrase 'may be like to be flexible more' is incorrect. The correct form is 'may like to be more flexible'.

× And the list doesn't do that.

✓ And the list doesn't allow that.

The phrase 'doesn't do that' is vague. 'Doesn't allow that' is clearer in context.

× I prepared.

✓ I prefer.

'I prepared' is incorrect in this context. The question asks about preference, so 'I prefer' is the correct verb.

× To have it in my phone because it's easy to have.

✓ To have it on my phone because it's easy to access.

'Have it in my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone'. Also, 'easy to have' is vague; 'easy to access' is clearer.

× My phone is is with me everywhere.

✓ My phone is with me everywhere.

There is a repeated word 'is'. Removing the extra 'is' corrects the sentence.

× And it's easy to check it anytime, anywhere.

✓ And it's easy to check it anytime, anywhere.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.