List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with simple, correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and aim for natural phrasing.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I keep a mental note of what I need to buy, which works well for me most of the time.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your approach clearly using simple sentences and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a work list because I prefer to work spontaneously. I find that planning too much can sometimes limit my creativity.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons using linking words.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive. However, others prefer lists as they help maintain discipline and improve productivity.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and always with me. However, sometimes I jot down quick notes on paper when I can't access my phone.

× Actually no, I'm off and I just like do To Do List in my head but I'm not do it there.

✓ Actually no, I'm off and I just like doing To Do Lists in my head but I don't do it there.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'doing' to indicate an activity one enjoys. Also, 'To Do List' should be pluralized to 'To Do Lists' to match the context of multiple lists. Additionally, 'I'm not do it' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't do it' to form the negative present tense.

× Actually no, I'm off and I just like do To Do List in my head but I'm not do it there.

✓ Actually no, I'm off and I just like doing To Do Lists in my head but I don't do it there.

The phrase 'To Do List' should be pluralized to 'To Do Lists' because the speaker refers to multiple lists or the concept in general. Using the singular form here is incorrect.

× I'm actually I'm not 'cause I don't know why you buddy is not helps for me.

✓ I'm actually not, because I don't know why your buddy does not help me.

The phrase 'you buddy is not helps' is incorrect. 'Buddy' should be preceded by the possessive pronoun 'your'. The verb 'helps' should be in the base form 'help' after 'does not' for correct present simple negative construction.

× OK, in my point of view, some people making list while they're working 'cause the they're working disappoint.

✓ OK, in my point of view, some people make lists while they're working because they are disciplined.

The phrase 'some people making list' should be 'some people make lists' to use the correct present simple tense. Also, 'disappoint' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'disciplined', an adjective describing people who are strict and organized.

× OK, in my point of view, some people making list while they're working 'cause the they're working disappoint.

✓ OK, in my point of view, some people make lists while they're working because they are disciplined.

The noun 'list' should be pluralized to 'lists' to agree with 'some people' who make multiple lists.

× Just how I do that in the moment.

✓ It's just how I do that in the moment.

The sentence lacks a subject pronoun. Adding 'It's' clarifies the subject and makes the sentence grammatically complete.

× Like right sometime here somewhere.

✓ Like right sometime here or somewhere.

The phrase 'here somewhere' is awkward; adding 'or' clarifies the options and improves sentence flow.

× Just how I do that in the moment.

✓ That's just how I do things in the moment.

Adding 'That's' provides a subject, and changing 'that' to 'things' makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× Like the first thing said, we went, Oh, I want I should to do it.

✓ Like the first thing I said, I went, 'Oh, I want to do it, I should do it.'

The original sentence lacks clarity and correct pronoun use. 'The first thing said' should be 'the first thing I said'. Also, 'I want I should to do it' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to do it, I should do it.'

× This is Daisy this No, I don't have this like list AM.

✓ This is daily, no, I don't have a list like that.

The phrase 'This is Daisy this No' is unclear; likely intended as 'This is daily'. 'I don't have this like list AM' is incorrect; 'a list like that' is the correct phrase. 'AM' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× OK, now that they're all things in the my phone an exactly the reason I wrote all their my list all their my plan in my phone.

✓ OK, now that everything is in my phone, that's exactly the reason I write all my lists and plans in my phone.

The phrase 'they're all things in the my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'everything is in my phone'. Also, 'I wrote all their my list all their my plan' is incorrect; it should be 'I write all my lists and plans'. Present tense 'write' fits better with the habitual action.

× OK, now that they're all things in the my phone an exactly the reason I wrote all their my list all their my plan in my phone.

✓ OK, now that everything is in my phone, that's exactly the reason I write all my lists and plans in my phone.

The nouns 'list' and 'plan' should be pluralized to 'lists' and 'plans' to reflect multiple items.

× But some time maybe some a list up there my my mind I wrote in a paper.

✓ But sometimes, maybe some lists in my mind I write on paper.

The phrase 'some time' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Some a list up there my my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'some lists in my mind'. Also, 'I wrote in a paper' should be 'I write on paper' to use the correct preposition and present tense.