List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, last week I planned my meals and wrote down all the ingredients, which saved me time and money.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. You should directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps you with your work or studies, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my college work because they help me organise my tasks. For instance, I break down large assignments into smaller steps, which makes them easier to complete on time. Therefore, making lists improves my productivity.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence, then support it with reasons using linking words. Be specific about why some people avoid making lists.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or complicated. Instead, they prefer to do tasks immediately without planning. However, this approach can sometimes lead to forgetting important things.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone using digital apps because it is more convenient and faster than writing on paper. For example, I can easily add or remove items and check them off while shopping, which saves time.

× If I have to go to the mall mix supermarket is means that before I go through this and decided to buy stuff so I need to make a list to make sure.

✓ If I have to go to the mall or supermarket, it means that before I go through this and decide to buy stuff, I need to make a list to make sure.

The original sentence has unclear structure and missing conjunctions, making it difficult to understand. Adding 'or' clarifies the options, and correcting verb tenses to 'decide' matches the present conditional context. Proper punctuation and conjunctions improve clarity and flow.

× I kind of like it. Quite late for your study but lying down and just college student. And at least I breakdown the more completely into the simple work. Step back here to finish.

✓ I kind of like it. Although I study late, I lie down as a college student. At least I break down the work more completely into simple steps to finish it.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Quite late for your study but lying down and just college student' is ungrammatical and confusing. Rephrasing to show contrast and clarifying actions improves coherence. 'Breakdown' should be 'break down' as a verb phrase, and the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I think it's maybe because they think that making list it more complicated in West the term, so they decided to do right now instead of making list.

✓ I think it's maybe because they think that making a list is more complicated in the long term, so they decide to do it right now instead of making a list.

The phrase 'in West the term' is incorrect; it should be 'in the long term' to express duration. Also, 'making list it more complicated' lacks the article 'a' and has a verb agreement issue. Correcting these prepositions and articles clarifies meaning.

× For me is using the digital app in phones it more comfortable in malls? More fast and faster than the traditional listing in the people or note.

✓ For me, using a digital app on phones is more comfortable in malls, and faster than the traditional listing on paper or notes.

The prepositions 'in phones' and 'in the people or note' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'on phones' and 'on paper or notes'. Also, 'more fast and faster' is redundant; 'faster' suffices. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.