Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I'm just laying necklace when I shop because it's helped me remember need a product I need to buy. Anna is happy with the now Donald Bye bye is done by order the product.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I often make a list for my work because the listing have made or remember what what God job I cannot I can finish in my inner today and work is very important.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Ah, I contain the some people Don Donna lied Michael is because it's now remember the product you need charge the job our brothers you need by and work in their life, but I lied Michael list in my life.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I refer to my list in the phone because the phone or when I am with you can make a list in phone. You can edit easy an the and bring the phone anywhere, anytime in any time in.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the products I need to buy. For example, last week I wrote down everything before going to the supermarket, so I didn't forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 25.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách danh sách giúp bạn trong công việc.
Exemplo: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete each day. This way, I can organize my time better and finish my work on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 15.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu và không trả lời đúng câu hỏi. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng.
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or they prefer to remember things in their own way. For example, some people feel lists limit their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.
Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can easily add or edit items anytime and carry my phone everywhere, so I never forget my list.
× Yes, I'm just laying necklace when I shop because it's helped me remember need a product I need to buy.
✓ Yes, I just make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the products I need to buy.
The phrase 'laying necklace' is incorrect and unclear. The correct verb form here is 'make a list' to express the action of listing items. Also, 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' to match the present tense context. The sentence needs clarity and correct verb usage.
× Anna is happy with the now Donald Bye bye is done by order the product.
✓ This sentence is unclear and does not convey a meaningful idea; it should be omitted or rewritten for clarity.
The sentence contains unclear pronouns and words that do not form a coherent sentence. It is recommended to omit or rewrite this sentence for clarity.
× Yes, I often make a list for my work because the listing have made or remember what what God job I cannot I can finish in my inner today and work is very important.
✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work because the list helps me remember which tasks I can finish today, and work is very important.
The word 'listing' should be 'list' (singular). 'Have made' is incorrect here; 'helps' fits better. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified for clarity.
× Ah, I contain the some people Don Donna lied Michael is because it's now remember the product you need charge the job our brothers you need by and work in their life, but I lied Michael list in my life.
✓ Ah, I think some people don't like making lists because they don't remember the products they need or the jobs they have to do in their life, but I like making lists in my life.
The sentence has many unclear pronouns and words. 'Contain' should be 'think', 'Don Donna lied Michael' is incorrect and should be 'don't like making lists'. The sentence needs to be rewritten for clarity and correct pronoun use.
× I refer to my list in the phone because the phone or when I am with you can make a list in phone.
✓ I refer to my list on my phone because when I am with it, I can make a list on the phone.
The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. 'You' is incorrectly used instead of 'it' referring to the phone. The sentence needs correction in pronoun and preposition usage.
× You can edit easy an the and bring the phone anywhere, anytime in any time in.
✓ You can easily edit it and bring the phone anywhere, anytime.
The adverb 'easy' should be 'easily' to modify the verb 'edit'. The phrase 'in any time in' is redundant and incorrect; 'anytime' suffices.