List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid repetition and use simpler, correct phrases. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy and compare prices easily.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Use linking words properly and avoid fragmented sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and saves time. I can check off tasks as I complete them, which keeps me on track.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct sentence structures and linking words like 'because' and 'but' properly. Try to give a clear reason and contrast in your answer.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they prefer to remember things themselves. However, others who have memory problems find lists very helpful.

Sugestão: Your answer is too long and has some unclear parts. Use shorter, clearer sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is faster and more convenient. I can check my list anytime and carry it with me easily.

× Yes I I can make most wanna shop because it makes me easy to check whether I have elected the thing or not and also it acts as a yardstick to compare my shopping.

✓ Yes, I can make most wanted shopping lists because it makes it easy for me to check whether I have selected the items or not, and also it acts as a yardstick to compare my shopping.

The phrase 'most wanna shop' is incorrect; it should be 'most wanted shopping lists' or similar. 'Makes me easy' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easy for me'. 'Elected the thing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'selected the items'. The sentence needs proper verb forms and clearer expression to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I do usually make this for my work and it also helps me in many ways light.

✓ Yes, I usually make this for my work and it also helps me in many ways.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'make'. The word 'light' at the end is incorrect and unnecessary, possibly a mishearing or typo.

× Because everything is already in it and in the list and I can check anytime that's better as completed the work or not.

✓ Because everything is already in the list, I can check anytime whether I have completed the work or not.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect structure. 'That's better as completed the work or not' is incorrect; it should be 'whether I have completed the work or not'. The sentence needs to be combined properly for clarity.

× Some people may don't like making less becaused they might take that it is time consuming and they can retain all the information in their mind.

✓ Some people may not like making lists because they might think that it is time-consuming and they can retain all the information in their mind.

'May don't' is incorrect; it should be 'may not'. 'Making less' is a typo for 'making lists'. 'Becaused' should be 'because'. 'Might take that' should be 'might think that'. The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb errors that need correction.

× But for some people who have memory problems. Makes their list to make their task easy.

✓ But for some people who have memory problems, they make lists to make their tasks easier.

The first sentence is a fragment. 'Makes their list' is incorrect; it should be 'they make lists'. 'Task easy' should be 'tasks easier' for correct adjective use and plural agreement.

× Usually I prefer to make list on my phone because it is less time consuming than writing yourself by pen on a paper and it is also very mobile and I can see check anytime weather as formulated the work or not and go through my list anytime of the day that I want.

✓ Usually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is less time-consuming than writing by hand on paper. It is also very portable, and I can check anytime whether I have completed the work or not and go through my list anytime during the day that I want.

The phrase 'make list on my phone' needs 'lists' plural and 'on my phone' is correct preposition. 'Writing yourself by pen on a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'writing by hand on paper'. 'Very mobile' is incorrect; 'portable' is better. 'See check anytime weather as formulated the work or not' is incorrect; it should be 'check anytime whether I have completed the work or not'. 'Anytime of the day that I want' should be 'anytime during the day that I want'.