Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Do you make a list when you shop?
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list for my work. And when I was going to the supermarket, I always make a list for what I buy. For example, I always rise of your bank some foods, vegetables or chocolate candies. And when I make a list from my work, I will mores.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe they feel that it's very complicated, complicated, an waste of times and most of them might have a very strong memories to memorize what they have to buy ice. But for me, I don't have a strong memory, so I need to make some list to ensure I clearly memorize what I need to buy.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
From point of views I prefer to make a lease on my phones because it's more convenience and I can take it every moment and it is also I need to use forms always so it's very convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,而是重复了考官的问题。建议直接回答问题,并且简洁明了地说明你是否会列购物清单。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,内容也不够具体。建议使用简单明了的句子,直接回答问题,并举具体例子说明列清单的效果。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks, which helps me stay organized and complete everything on time. For shopping, I list items like vegetables and snacks to avoid forgetting anything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or believe they have a good memory. However, I prefer making lists since it helps me remember things better.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题,建议使用正确的句型和词汇,清晰表达偏好和原因。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can access it anytime, which helps me stay organized.
× Yes, I always make a list for my work. And when I was going to the supermarket, I always make a list for what I buy.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work. And when I go to the supermarket, I always make a list of what I buy.
这里的时间是一般现在时,表示习惯动作,所以应该用一般现在时go而不是过去进行时was going。
× For example, I always rise of your bank some foods, vegetables or chocolate candies.
✓ For example, I always buy some food, vegetables, or chocolate candies.
句中使用了错误的词汇和介词,'rise of your bank'没有意义,应该用buy表示购买,foods应为food,且不需要复数形式。
× And when I make a list from my work, I will mores.
✓ And when I make a list for my work, I will buy more.
句子结构混乱,'make a list from my work'应为'make a list for my work','mores'不是正确单词,应为'buy more'。
× Maybe they feel that it's very complicated, complicated, an waste of times and most of them might have a very strong memories to memorize what they have to buy ice.
✓ Maybe they feel that it's very complicated, a waste of time, and most of them might have a very strong memory to memorize what they have to buy.
'an waste of times'错误,应该是'a waste of time','memories'应为不可数名词'memory','buy ice'可能是口误,去掉ice更通顺。
× But for me, I don't have a strong memory, so I need to make some list to ensure I clearly memorize what I need to buy.
✓ But for me, I don't have a strong memory, so I need to make some lists to ensure I clearly memorize what I need to buy.
'some list'应为复数形式'some lists',因为some后面接可数名词复数。
× From point of views I prefer to make a lease on my phones because it's more convenience and I can take it every moment and it is also I need to use forms always so it's very convenient.
✓ From my point of view, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient, and I can take it everywhere. Also, I always need to use forms, so it's very convenient.
'From point of views'应为'From my point of view','make a lease'应为'make a list','on my phones'应为'on my phone','more convenience'应为'more convenient',句子结构混乱,需调整使其通顺。