Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail. Avoid fillers (umm) and tense errors. Use linking phrase for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing. When I was a child I often sang songs by my favorite celebrities because I love music, and singing makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly with specific examples and correct grammar. Replace vague phrases with concrete reasons and use a linking word.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I think I have a natural talent for singing because my family often compliments my voice and I learned songs by listening to my mother sing.

Sugestão: This is a good answer: clear topic sentence and relevant details. Improve by tightening sentences and using smoother linking words. Correct small phrasing issues.

Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax. For example, after a long day at work I put on music and sing to unwind, and sometimes I practice new songs to improve my voice.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain with clear reasoning and correct vocabulary. Replace informal fillers and scientific terms with simple explanation, and use a linking phrase.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it can lift their mood. For example, singing or listening to music can reduce stress and create positive feelings, which makes people enjoy themselves.

Sugestão: Provide one clear, complete sentence and follow with a specific reason or example. Remove repetition and fillers; use linking words such as 'however' or 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing if they have a pleasant voice because it is inspiring. For example, I like listening to live performances because a good singer can convey emotion and make the song memorable.

Sugestão: State the fact clearly, then give a concise reason and, if relevant, mention future plans. Avoid doubled negatives and filler words.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken a singing class because I believe I have a natural ability and have not felt the need. In the future I might take lessons to develop technique and expand my range.

× Yes I do when I was a kid umm I used to a lot singing of umm celebrities songs because I love songs and when I sing a song I usually felt enjoy.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a kid. I used to sing a lot of celebrities' songs because I loved songs, and when I sang a song I usually felt happy.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb forms: 'I do when I was a kid' mixes present and past; use past 'I did'. 'used to a lot singing' is wrong order and form; use 'used to sing a lot'. 'celebrities songs' needs possessive: 'celebrities\' songs'. 'I love songs' should be past 'I loved' to match past context. 'I usually felt enjoy' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'happy' or 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for past habits and use correct verb patterns and possessive form.

× No, I haven't before, but I think I have innate singing skills because I'm good singing and maybe I like sing a song like my mother.

✓ No, I haven't before, but I think I have innate singing skills because I'm good at singing and maybe I like to sing songs like my mother.

Incorrect use of present perfect phrase 'I haven't before' lacks object; better 'I haven't before' is acceptable but clearer as 'No, I haven't'. 'I'm good singing' requires preposition 'good at' (grammar type: incorrect use of adjectives or prepositions). 'I like sing a song' needs infinitive 'to sing' and plural 'songs' for general preference. Use 'like to sing songs like my mother.' Suggestion: use 'good at + -ing' and 'like to + verb'.

× I usually sing for myself because singing makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, after a long day at work, I often put on music and sing, unwind, and sometimes I practice new songs to improve my voice.

✓ I usually sing for myself because singing makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, after a long day at work, I often put on music and sing to unwind, and sometimes I practice new songs to improve my voice.

Missing infinitive 'to' before 'unwind' is required when expressing purpose ('sing to unwind'). This is a verb form/structure issue. Also sentence is otherwise fine. Suggestion: use 'to + verb' when indicating purpose.

× I do think singing can bring happiness and enjoy to people because when singing a song, umm release dopamine then uh, people usually happiness and that's why umm I think all people enjoy.

✓ I do think singing can bring happiness and enjoyment to people because when people sing a song, it releases dopamine, and people usually feel happy, so I think everyone enjoys it.

Multiple problems: 'bring happiness and enjoy' mixes noun and verb; use noun 'enjoyment'. 'when singing a song' needs subject 'when people sing a song'. 'release dopamine then uh, people usually happiness' has missing verb and noun forms; use 'it releases dopamine' and 'people usually feel happy'. 'all people enjoy' is vague; use 'everyone enjoys it'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and include subjects and verbs for clarity.

× If those people can sing, very beautiful. I I want to listen to others singing. It depends on the people's voice. If people's voice very beautiful. Uh, I do like, enjoy and listen to.

✓ If those people can sing, they are very beautiful singers. I want to listen to others singing. It depends on people's voices. If people's voices are very beautiful, I do like listening to them.

Fragmented and ungrammatical sentences: 'If those people can sing, very beautiful' misses subject and verb; add 'they are very beautiful singers' or 'their voices are beautiful'. Repetition 'I I' is disfluent. 'It depends on the people's voice' should be plural 'people's voices'. 'If people's voice very beautiful' lacks verb 'are'. 'I do like, enjoy and listen to' is incorrect coordination and missing object; use 'I do like listening to them' or 'I enjoy listening to them'. Suggestion: ensure each conditional has subject+verb, use plural forms for 'voices', and use gerunds after 'like'/'enjoy'.

× No, I don't have ever take taken a single class because I actually have innate singing ability. That's why uh, I didn't think about taking a singing class before.

✓ No, I have never taken a single class because I actually have an innate singing ability. That's why I didn't think about taking a singing class before.

Incorrect auxiliary and past participle: 'I don't have ever take taken' is wrong. Use present perfect 'I have never taken'. 'innate singing ability' needs an article 'an'. The final sentence is correct except for filler words. Suggestion: use 'have never + past participle' for experiences and include articles where needed.