Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use a wider range of vocabulary relevant to the context.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it refreshes my mind whenever I feel stressed or upset. Therefore, I often sing during my free time as it acts as a therapy for my mental well-being.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'from them' and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt how to sing when I was a child from my music teacher. Since then, I have enjoyed singing both classical and modern songs because they help me relax and refresh my mind.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details with proper linking words. Avoid confusing phrases and improve vocabulary usage.

Exemplo: I usually sing various types of songs, but I especially enjoy singing classical and modern melodies. I would like to perform these songs for my family and friends because they appreciate this music.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor errors and use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it refreshes the mind and helps reduce stress. Therefore, singing acts as a form of therapy that promotes relaxation and joy.

× Yes, I have learned to sing songs when I was a child from them.

✓ Yes, I learned to sing songs when I was a child from them.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present perfect tense 'have learned' with a specific past time 'when I was a child'. In English, the simple past tense 'learned' should be used for actions completed at a definite time in the past.

× Usually I sing all types of songs, but specifically I want to sing for often melodies or modern songs.

✓ Usually I sing all types of songs, but specifically I want to sing often melodies or modern songs.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here. The verb 'sing' does not require 'for' before the object in this context. Removing 'for' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Most play because in the classical music.

✓ Most people play classical music.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Most play because in the classical music' is unclear. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject and verb, making the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I really think seeing can bring happiness to people because it refreshes our mind when we feel stressed or depressed, it really helps to get relaxed.

✓ Yes, I really think singing can bring happiness to people because it refreshes our minds when we feel stressed or depressed; it really helps us to get relaxed.

The word 'seeing' is a typo and should be 'singing'. Also, 'our mind' should be plural 'our minds' to agree with the plural pronoun 'we'. Additionally, 'helps to get relaxed' is better expressed as 'helps us to get relaxed' for clarity and correctness.