Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I feel I'm so free”和“I'm enjoy to singing”，应改为“I feel so free”和“I enjoy singing”。此外，句子结构较为简单，缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel free and relaxed. Moreover, I especially enjoy singing when I am alone, as it helps me express my emotions.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误明显，如“I haven't learned to singing”应为“I haven't learned to sing”，以及“when I'm shower”应为“when I'm in the shower”。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用。

Exemplo: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I often sing in the shower because it helps me relax.

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清楚，但“in front of the people”应改为“in front of people”更自然。建议增加连接词，使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I usually don't feel relaxed when singing in front of people.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can brings”应为“can bring”，“I see so many”应为“I saw so many”。句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用正确时态和表达。

Exemplo: I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I was a child, I saw many performances on TV, and they made me feel very joyful.

× I love singing because when I'm singing I feel I'm so free and I'm enjoy to singing when I'm alone.

✓ I love singing because when I'm singing I feel so free and I enjoy singing when I'm alone.

动词 enjoy 后面应直接跟动名词形式，不能用不定式 to singing。这里应改为 enjoy singing。

× I haven't learned to singing, but I'm always singing when I'm shower.

✓ I haven't learned to sing, but I'm always singing when I'm showering.

动词 learn 后面应接不定式 to do，不能用动名词形式。应改为 learn to sing。另外，动词 shower 在这里表示正在洗澡，应使用现在进行时 showering。

× I'm always singing when I'm shower.

✓ I'm always singing when I'm showering.

这里的 shower 是动词，表示“洗澡”，应使用现在进行时 showering，不能用名词形式。

× I want to sing for myself because usually I'm not too relaxed when I'm singing in front of the people.

✓ I want to sing for myself because usually I'm not too relaxed when I'm singing in front of people.

在英语中，表示泛指人群时，通常不加定冠词 the，故应去掉 the。

× I think singing can brings happiness to people because when I was a child I see so many, I saw so many performance in the TV and I think I'm so enjoyable.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because when I was a child I saw so many performances on TV and I thought it was so enjoyable.

情态动词 can 后应接动词原形 bring，而不是带 s 的第三人称单数形式 brings。动词 see 在过去时应为 saw。名词 performance 应用复数 performances。介词 on TV 更常用。最后，enjoyable 是形容词，表达感受时应用形容词，且时态应与过去时一致，故改为 thought it was so enjoyable。