Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and coherent. Avoid redundancy and ensure your ideas flow logically. For example, explain clearly why you like singing and how it affects your mood, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, but mostly I sing alone, like in the bathroom. Singing helps me to change my mood; it makes me feel happy and excited. In fact, it acts like a therapy for me whenever I feel stressed.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct verb forms and sentence structures. Also, provide more specific details about your learning experience and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt singing at school where music classes were held for all students. I participated actively and even took part in local music competitions, which helped me improve my skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by making sentences more concise and natural. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your feelings with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Although I usually sing for myself, if I had the chance, I would sing for my parents. I have even written a song for them, which I haven't shared with anyone else. Singing for them would make me feel very grateful and happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words appropriately and avoid repeating similar ideas. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Definitely, music has a special power to connect people beyond boundaries. It uplifts moods through its beats and rhythm. For example, whenever I feel sad, I listen to music, and it always helps me feel better.

× Whenever I sing, switch my mood, I feel very happy and excited at the same point and it's like a therapy for me.

✓ Whenever I sing, it switches my mood, I feel very happy and excited at the same time and it's like therapy for me.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'switch my mood' and uses 'switch' instead of 'switches' which is needed for third person singular. Also, 'at the same point' should be 'at the same time' for correct idiomatic expression. 'Like a therapy' should be 'like therapy' as 'therapy' is uncountable here.

× Yes, when I was in my school there were music class held for every student.

✓ Yes, when I was in school, there were music classes held for every student.

The phrase 'in my school' is better as 'in school' in this context. 'Music class' should be plural 'music classes' to agree with 'every student' and the plural verb 'were'.

× Then I took participate and I sing.

✓ Then I took part and I sang.

'Took participate' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'took part'. Also, 'I sing' should be in past tense 'I sang' to match the past context.

× I used to sing that time and I also I participate in music competition which held in locally and and.

✓ I used to sing at that time and I also participated in music competitions which were held locally.

'Used to sing that time' should be 'used to sing at that time'. 'I participate' should be past tense 'I participated'. 'Music competition' should be plural 'music competitions' to match the context. 'Which held in locally' should be 'which were held locally' for correct passive voice and preposition use.

× As I said that I only sing for myself but if I get chance to sing for someone then I will sing for my parents.

✓ As I said, I only sing for myself but if I get a chance to sing for someone, then I will sing for my parents.

The phrase 'if I get chance' needs the article 'a' before 'chance'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I will dedicate a song which I which is written by me and I never share that song with anyone.

✓ I will dedicate a song which I have written and have never shared with anyone.

The phrase 'which I which is written by me' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'which I have written'. Also, 'I never share' should be past perfect 'have never shared' to indicate the action up to now.

× Moreover, I feel very grateful if I sing a song for them.

✓ Moreover, I would feel very grateful if I sang a song for them.

The sentence is a conditional statement about a hypothetical situation, so the correct form is 'would feel' and 'if I sang' (second conditional).

× Definitely, I think music has a special power which connect people beyond their limits and music uplifts their mood with the beats and the rhythm and also moreover, whenever I feel sad, I used to listen music and it uplift my mood.

✓ Definitely, I think music has a special power which connects people beyond their limits and music uplifts their mood with the beats and the rhythm. Also, whenever I feel sad, I listen to music and it uplifts my mood.

'Which connect' should be 'which connects' for subject-verb agreement. 'Used to listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music' for present habitual action. 'It uplift' should be 'it uplifts' for subject-verb agreement. 'Also moreover' is redundant; only one is needed.