Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use the present tense and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clearer reason with linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me feel peaceful and relaxed. Whenever I sing, it calms my mind and lifts my spirits.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks proper grammar and structure. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, recently I have been learning how to sing by watching tutorials on YouTube. These videos teach me how to sing clearly and improve my vocal techniques.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but could be more natural and concise. Use correct prepositions and avoid redundancy. Add linking words to explain your reason.

Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because singing brings me a lot of joy and helps me find peace.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear parts. Use correct verb tenses and avoid unnecessary words. Provide a clear reason with linking words to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and peaceful.

× The reason is when I sung such song.

✓ The reason is when I sang such a song.

The verb 'sung' is the past participle form and should be used with an auxiliary verb, but here simple past tense 'sang' is correct to describe a past action. Also, 'such song' needs an article 'a' before 'song'.

× Well recently I want to get some research so I open YouTube and I get lot of information from YouTube that how to sing the song clearly are play the vocals, play guitars so that's why I.

✓ Well, recently I wanted to do some research, so I opened YouTube and got a lot of information about how to sing the song clearly, how to play the vocals, and play guitars, so that's why I did.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, past tense verbs 'wanted', 'opened', and 'got' should be used. Also, 'get lot of information' needs an article 'a' before 'lot'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Well, I usually sing song for me because I sing songs with lot of love and find peace.

✓ Well, I usually sing songs for myself because I sing songs with a lot of love and find peace.

The preposition 'for me' is incorrect here; 'for myself' is the correct reflexive pronoun to indicate singing for one's own benefit. Also, 'sing song' should be plural 'sing songs' and 'lot of love' needs an article 'a' before 'lot'.

× Yes, when we sing songs and peoples are happy and felt relaxed as well as very peaceful.

✓ Yes, when we sing songs, people are happy and feel relaxed as well as very peaceful.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the correct plural noun. Also, 'felt' should be 'feel' to maintain present tense consistency with 'are happy'. Commas are added for clarity.