Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear in places. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I love to' and focus on making your sentences clear and concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, 'I used to enjoy rock music when I was younger, but now I prefer classical music because it helps me relax after work.'

Exemplo: I really enjoy singing. When I was younger, I used to listen to rock music, but now I prefer classical music because it helps me relax after a busy day at work. In the future, I hope to discover other types of music that can help me relieve stress.

Sugestão: Your answer contains many fillers like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and avoid unnecessary pauses. Also, clarify your points with better structure and linking words. For example, 'I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I often sing in the shower for fun.'

Exemplo: I have never taken formal singing lessons or received any certificates. However, I often sing songs while taking a shower just for enjoyment. Sometimes, I also listen carefully to music to improve my singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary fillers. Use linking words to connect your sentences. For example, 'I sometimes sing at family gatherings or parties when my friends or relatives ask me to. Occasionally, I also sing during quiz programs.'

Exemplo: I like to sing for my family and friends during celebrations or parties when they ask me. Occasionally, I also participate in quiz programs where I have to sing. However, these opportunities happen only sometimes.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using clearer linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and try to be more precise. For example, 'Although I am not a professional singer, singing occasionally makes me feel happy and relaxed. I believe singing can help people feel better during difficult times.'

Exemplo: Although I am not a professional singer, singing occasionally makes me feel comfortable and happy. I think when someone is going through a tough time, singing can help refresh their mind and improve their mood.

× Back when I was a bit young, I loved I used to listen rock music.

✓ Back when I was a bit young, I used to listen to rock music.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'loved' and 'used to' and misses the preposition 'to' after 'listen'. The correct past tense expression is 'used to listen to'.

× At present I love to I love to listen some classical music

✓ At present I love to listen to some classical music

The phrase 'listen some classical music' is incorrect; the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'I love to I love to' is repetitive and should be corrected.

× in the future I hope that I will also love to like some kind of music that will help me to resist my pressure and relax myself after a busy time at work.

✓ In the future, I hope that I will also like some kind of music that will help me relieve my stress and relax after a busy time at work.

The phrase 'love to like' is redundant and incorrect. 'Resist my pressure' is not idiomatic; 'relieve my stress' is more appropriate. Also, 'relax myself' is better as 'relax'.

× I didn't enroll myself at any academic institution to, uh, learn how to sing.

✓ I didn't enroll myself in any academic institution to learn how to sing.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'enroll in' is the correct collocation.

× sometimes I sing a song when I usually take a bath, uh, take a shower, uh, and uh, sometimes I also try to listen in.

✓ Sometimes I sing a song when I usually take a bath or a shower, and sometimes I also try to listen in.

The phrase 'listen in' is incomplete without context; it should be 'listen in' to something. Also, 'when I usually take a bath' is awkward; 'when I take a bath or a shower' is better.

× some of my friends are my family members asked me uh, to sing a song.

✓ Some of my friends and family members asked me to sing a song.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'are' and separates 'friends' and 'family members' awkwardly. The corrected sentence combines them properly.

× Sometimes I attend umm, quiz, uh, program, uh, I participate quiz program when I uh, need to song.

✓ Sometimes I attend quiz programs; I participate in quiz programs when I need to sing.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and prepositions. 'Participate quiz program' should be 'participate in quiz programs'. Also, 'need to song' is incorrect; it should be 'need to sing'.

× When I learn, when I sing something occasionally it actually make me feel very comfortable and happy.

✓ When I sing something occasionally, it actually makes me feel very comfortable and happy.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'When I learn' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× And I think when somebody have a passing a gloomy time, they can sing a song to make their mind fresh.

✓ And I think when somebody is going through a gloomy time, they can sing a song to refresh their mind.

'Somebody have' is incorrect; it should be 'somebody is'. 'Passing a gloomy time' is awkward; 'going through a gloomy time' is better. 'Make their mind fresh' is unidiomatic; 'refresh their mind' is correct.