Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer has several pronunciation and vocabulary errors, such as 'seeing' instead of 'singing' and unclear phrases like 'lit off thing'. To improve, focus on using correct vocabulary and clear sentence structures. Also, try to keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, I often sing along to my favourite songs, which makes me feel happy and at ease.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'voice write'. To improve, use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I have taken singing lessons because I used to think my voice was not very good. Therefore, I wanted to learn the right techniques to improve and sound more like a professional singer.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes, such as confusing pronouns and incomplete sentences. To improve, directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons or examples using linking words. Also, ensure correct use of pronouns and sentence structure.

Exemplo: I would like to sing songs by JJ, a famous Chinese singer. I enjoy his music because his voice is soothing and his songs have deep and mysterious meanings.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has pronunciation errors ('seeing' instead of 'singing') and some incomplete sentences. To improve, use correct vocabulary and complete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when people feel stressed, they often go to KTV to sing loudly without any worries, which helps them relax and feel joyful.

× Yes, I really like seeing.

✓ Yes, I really like singing.

The student mistakenly used 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. 'Singing' is the correct present participle form of the verb 'sing' to express the activity they like.

× I think seeing is the best way to lit off thing.

✓ I think singing is the best way to let off steam.

The student used 'seeing' instead of 'singing' and 'lit off thing' which is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'let off steam', meaning to release stress or energy. 'Singing' is the correct verb here.

× You know, I really like the DJ in the topic, the virus tick tick tock DJ because you can see follow them and you will feel very comfortable and and and feel at ease.

✓ You know, I really like the DJ on the topic, the viral TikTok DJ, because you can follow them and you will feel very comfortable and at ease.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on the topic' is more appropriate. Also, 'see follow them' is incorrect; it should be 'follow them'. The phrase 'viral TikTok DJ' is corrected for clarity and accuracy.

× It's really good way to.

✓ It's really a good way to relax.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'a' before 'good way' and completing the sentence with 'to relax' makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Yes, because you know, I used to think my voice is not so good listening, so I just learn how to voice write so that I can use the right technique to.

✓ Yes, because you know, I used to think my voice was not so good, so I just learned how to use vocal techniques so that I can sing better.

The student mixed tenses and used incorrect verb forms. 'Used to think' requires past tense 'was' instead of 'is'. 'Learn' should be past tense 'learned'. 'Voice write' is incorrect; 'use vocal techniques' is clearer.

× Sing and just want to sing more. Sounds like a singer or something.

✓ I want to sing more and sound like a singer or something.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. Combining them into one sentence with correct verb forms improves clarity and grammar.

× I mean of JJ's songs, I don't know if you know him.

✓ I mean JJ's songs; I don't know if you know him.

The phrase 'I mean of JJ's songs' is incorrect. Removing 'of' makes the sentence grammatically correct. Also, a semicolon improves sentence flow.

× I really listen.

✓ I really like listening to his songs.

The phrase 'I really listen' is incomplete and unclear. The student likely meant to express enjoyment of listening to the songs, so 'I really like listening to his songs' is correct.

× I like to listen her songs because it's really comforting and full of knowledge and mysterious.

✓ I like to listen to her songs because they're really comforting, full of knowledge, and mysterious.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with the plural 'songs'. The adjectives are listed correctly but need commas for clarity.

× Definitely. I think seeing is an excellent way to make people feel happy.

✓ Definitely. I think singing is an excellent way to make people feel happy.

The student used 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. 'Singing' is the correct present participle form of the verb 'sing' to express the activity.

× You know, when people feel stressed, they are likely go to KTV to sing songs, just to sing loudly and without any worry.

✓ You know, when people feel stressed, they are likely to go to KTV to sing songs, just to sing loudly and without any worry.

The phrase 'are likely go' is missing the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'are likely to go'.

× Worry and just to let out.

✓ They sing without worry and just to let it out.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'They sing' and completing the phrase clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.