Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là việc sử dụng động từ (ví dụ: 'I don't sing' thay vì 'I don't singing'). Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: No, I don't sing very often because I don't have a soft voice, so I'm not confident. I prefer listening to music as it helps me relax and refresh my energy. However, sometimes when I feel good, I sing a little.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'practice singing' thay vì 'practice sing'. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'friend'.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I sometimes practice singing along when I go to karaoke with my friends. For example, I try to hit high notes. It's mainly for entertainment and having fun with them.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'I want to sing' thay vì 'I want to singing', và 'I am always ready' thay vì 'I always ready'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chi tiết hơn.

Exemplo: I always want to sing for my friends and family on their birthdays. I am always ready to sing the 'Happy Birthday' song to celebrate and make them happy. These moments are very special, and we enjoy the parties a lot.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'It creates' thay vì 'It's create', và 'individuals' thay vì 'individual'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời làm rõ ý hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I believe singing can bring a lot of happiness to people because it creates a joyful atmosphere and connects individuals. For example, people sing and dance together to celebrate parties. Besides, singing can also help improve someone's mood when they feel down.

× No, I don't singing very often because I think I don't have a soft voice so I'm not confident about singing as much.

✓ No, I don't sing very often because I think I don't have a soft voice so I'm not confident about singing as much.

The auxiliary verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Don't singing' is incorrect; it should be 'don't sing'.

× That help me relax and chill and refresh my energy.

✓ That helps me relax and chill and refresh my energy.

The subject 'That' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject.

× Instead sometime I practice sing along when I go to karaoke with my friend.

✓ Instead, sometimes I practice singing along when I go to karaoke with my friend.

The verb 'practice' when followed by another verb should be followed by the '-ing' form 'singing'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× It's about entertaining and having fun with my friend.

✓ It's about entertaining and having fun with my friends.

When referring to more than one friend, the plural form 'friends' should be used.

× For me, I always want to singing for my friend and my family on their birthday.

✓ For me, I always want to sing for my friends and my family on their birthday.

After 'want to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match context.

× I always ready to sing the happy birthday song to celebrate and make them happy.

✓ I am always ready to sing the happy birthday song to celebrate and make them happy.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to form the present tense 'I am always ready'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete.

× It's very great moment and we enjoy the party so much.

✓ It's a very great moment and we enjoy the party so much.

The phrase 'very great moment' needs an article 'a' before 'very' to be grammatically correct.

× It's create a joyful atmosphere and connection between individual.

✓ It creates a joyful atmosphere and connection between individuals.

The verb should be in the third person singular present tense 'creates' to agree with the subject 'It'. Also, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to match context.

× For example, people singing and dancing to connect and celebrate a party.

✓ For example, people sing and dance to connect and celebrate a party.

The verbs should be in the base form 'sing' and 'dance' to correctly express habitual actions.

× Besides, it's also help people who had a bad mood to help you again.

✓ Besides, it also helps people who are in a bad mood to feel better again.

The verb should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'had a bad mood' is past tense and should be 'are in a bad mood' to match present context. The phrase 'to help you again' is unclear and corrected to 'to feel better again' for clarity.