Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid filler words such as 'umm' and repetitive phrases to sound more natural and confident.

Exemplo: I don't like singing because my voice often cracks, and people have told me I'm not a good singer. As a result, I lack confidence and prefer not to sing in public.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and direct answer first, then explain your feelings with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds to improve fluency and clarity.

Exemplo: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I feel very self-conscious about my voice. Therefore, I haven't had the confidence to find a teacher or try to improve.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite good but could be improved by making it more concise and avoiding informal phrases like 'make myself a clown'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' effectively to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: I only want to sing for my closest friends and family because they won't judge me, so I feel more confident around them.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'yeah' and try to use more precise vocabulary such as 'improves my mood' instead of 'makes my mood brighten up'. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because listening to good singers always improves my mood and makes me feel joyful.

× Why I really don't like singing because my voice is just not suited for singing because I always have voice cracks and umm people tell me that I'm a bad singer so I don't have the confidence to sing umm, that's why I just don't like singing.

✓ I really don't like singing because my voice is just not suited for it. I always have voice cracks, and people tell me that I'm a bad singer, so I don't have the confidence to sing. That's why I just don't like singing.

The original sentence is a run-on with improper sentence structure and lacks clarity. Starting with 'Why I really don't like singing' is incorrect; it should be a statement, not a question. Breaking the sentence into smaller, clearer sentences improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× No, never because of the reasons I stated above. I I'm just so self-conscious and so I don't even dare to find a teacher to make myself improve because I don't believe in myself and I really don't don't think that there is any chance that I will improve in singing.

✓ No, never because of the reasons I stated above. I'm just so self-conscious that I don't even dare to find a teacher to help me improve because I don't believe in myself, and I really don't think there is any chance that I will improve in singing.

The sentence contains repetition ('I I'm' and 'don't don't') and awkward phrasing ('to make myself improve'). Correcting these errors and restructuring the sentence for clarity and grammatical accuracy is necessary.

× I think the only people I want to sing for are my closest friends and my family because I know that they won't judge me so I feel more confident in front of them and it's OK for me to make myself a clown.

✓ I think the only people I want to sing for are my closest friends and my family because I know that they won't judge me, so I feel more confident in front of them, and it's OK for me to make a fool of myself.

The phrase 'make myself a clown' is not idiomatic in English. The correct expression is 'make a fool of myself.' Also, commas are added for better sentence flow.