Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中表达的意思不够清晰，语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，明确表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免使用不恰当的短语。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and express my emotions.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误较多，句子不连贯，信息表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述学习唱歌的经历，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a high school student. At first, my singing skills were poor and I felt nervous, so I took online singing lessons to improve.

Sugestão: 表达不够自然，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确说明想为谁唱歌以及原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my friends because they always encourage me to keep practicing when I feel upset.

Sugestão: 回答中使用了不恰当的词汇（如“Renaissance”），表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，清楚表达唱歌带来快乐的原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing together can create a sense of unity and joy, which makes people feel happy.

× I like singing because singing can help me to relieve the stress and show the difference between other people.

✓ I like singing because singing can help me relieve stress and show the difference between myself and other people.

动词后面不需要加to，动词不定式to relieve应改为动词原形relieve。去掉the是因为stress是不可数名词，不需要冠词。句子中表达“show the difference between myself and other people”更清晰。

× Yes, I had one. Was this high school student.

✓ Yes, I had one. I was a high school student.

句子缺少主语，且时态应为过去时，I was a high school student是正确表达。

× My singing skill were very poor.

✓ My singing skill was very poor.

skill是单数，谓语动词应使用单数was，保持主谓一致。

× So I learnt the singing from the online lectures.

✓ So I learnt singing from online lectures.

动词learnt后面直接接动名词singing，不需要加定冠词the。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合口语习惯。

× I want to sing for my friends because when I was upset about the practicing, my friend always encouraged me to insist it.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because when I was upset about practicing, my friend always encouraged me to keep going.

practicing前不需要加the，且insist后不接it，改为keep going更符合表达坚持的意思。

× Yes, when people sing the same songs and they have a sense of the Renaissance which leads them happy.

✓ Yes, when people sing the same songs, they have a sense of renaissance which makes them happy.

句子结构不完整，缺少主句，且Renaissance不应大写，且表达应为makes them happy。