Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain your reasons in a more natural and coherent way. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'not legal to my Islamic logical'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because it doesn't align with my personal beliefs. However, I enjoy listening to music by artists like Taylor Swift and Selena Gomez because their songs are inspiring and enjoyable.

Sugestão: Provide a direct answer first, then explain your opinion clearly. Avoid confusing expressions and ensure your sentences are coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I believe that singing is a natural skill that anyone can develop on their own without lessons.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clear, grammatically correct sentences. Avoid filler words like 'like' and ensure your ideas are well connected with linking words. Be specific about why you want to sing for these groups.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my school, my culture, and my family because these are the people and communities I feel most connected to and comfortable with.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and grammatically correct answer. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically. Avoid unclear phrases like 'negative diet things' and express your ideas more precisely.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people release negative emotions and improves their mood by focusing on positive thoughts.

× it's not legal to my Islamic logical

✓ it's not legal according to my Islamic logic

The phrase 'legal to my Islamic logical' is incorrect because 'legal' should be followed by 'according to' when referring to rules or beliefs. Also, 'logical' should be 'logic' as a noun. The correct preposition here is 'according to' to express conformity with Islamic principles.

× I love to listen to a music like a Taylor Swift or Selena Gomez

✓ I love to listen to music like Taylor Swift or Selena Gomez

The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'a Taylor Swift' is incorrect because names do not take articles. The correct sentence omits 'a' before 'music' and the names.

× like anybody can learn how to sing by itself

✓ like anybody can learn how to sing by themselves

The pronoun 'itself' is used for objects or animals, not people. For people, the reflexive pronoun should be 'themselves' when referring to 'anybody' (an indefinite pronoun).

× I wanted to sing for like my school, for my culture, for my family

✓ I want to sing for my school, my culture, and my family

The verb tense should be present 'want' to match the question 'Who do you want to sing for?'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here and the preposition 'for' is correctly used but should be consistent and concise. The sentence is improved by removing 'like' and using 'and' to list items.

× Like I think this is the comfortable for me, for comfortable topics for me

✓ I think these are comfortable topics for me

'Comfortable' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'the' in this context. Also, 'this is the comfortable' is incorrect; it should be plural 'these are comfortable topics'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× because they singing and takes off of negative feelings

✓ because singing takes away negative feelings

The phrase 'they singing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' as a gerund subject. Also, 'takes off of' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'takes away'. Subject-verb agreement requires 'takes' with singular 'singing'.

× negative diet things and yourself about what you're thinking

✓ negative thoughts and feelings about what you're thinking

The phrase 'negative diet things' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misuse. It should be 'negative thoughts and feelings'. Also, 'yourself about what you're thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'about what you're thinking'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects preposition use.