Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say "Yes, I like singing very much, but since I am an introvert, I prefer not to sing in public. However, I enjoy listening to music a lot."

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing very much, but since I am an introvert, I prefer not to sing in public. However, I enjoy listening to music a lot because it relaxes me and lifts my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Begin with a direct response, then explain your interest with linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing. For example, "No, I have never taken singing classes, but if I get the chance, I would definitely like to learn because I am very interested in singing."

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing classes, but if I get the chance, I would definitely like to learn because I am very interested in singing.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence and add specific details. For example, "I usually want to sing for my girlfriend, but sometimes I sing badly, which makes her upset. Occasionally, I think about singing for my friends, but I haven't done that yet."

Exemplo: I usually want to sing for my girlfriend, but sometimes I sing badly, which makes her upset. Occasionally, I think about singing for my friends, but I haven't done that yet.

Sugestão: Your answer is positive but can be improved by using better grammar and linking words. Start with a clear statement, then explain with specific reasons. For example, "Absolutely, I believe singing brings happiness to people. Whenever I feel bored or stressed, I listen to music and sing, which helps me relax and improves my mood."

Exemplo: Absolutely, I believe singing brings happiness to people. Whenever I feel bored or stressed, I listen to music and sing, which helps me relax and improves my mood.

× Yes, I like them very much, but I am a very introvert person that's why I did not sing in the public and I'm a good listener and I love listening music.

✓ Yes, I like it very much, but I am a very introverted person; that's why I do not sing in public. I'm a good listener and I love listening to music.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'singing' is singular or uncountable, so 'it' should be used. 'Introvert' should be 'introverted' as an adjective. 'Did not sing' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'do not sing' is appropriate. 'In the public' should be 'in public' without 'the'. Also, 'listening music' needs the preposition 'to' as 'listening to music'.

× No, I did not face any type of classes for singing, but if I ever get a chance for to learn things that I definitely want to learn singing because I have very interested person in.

✓ No, I have not taken any singing classes, but if I ever get a chance to learn, I definitely want to learn singing because I am very interested.

'Did not face any type of classes' is awkward; 'have not taken any singing classes' is better. 'If I ever get a chance for to learn things' is incorrect; it should be 'if I ever get a chance to learn'. 'I have very interested person in' is incorrect; it should be 'I am very interested'.

× Usually I think for my girlfriend but sometimes I sing very bad then she uh often uh angry on me.

✓ Usually I think about my girlfriend, but sometimes I sing very badly, then she often gets angry with me.

'Think for' should be 'think about'. 'Sing very bad' should be 'sing very badly' because 'badly' is an adverb modifying the verb 'sing'. 'She uh often uh angry on me' is incorrect; it should be 'she often gets angry with me'.

× But sometime I also think for my friends but I have not that type of thing.

✓ But sometimes I also think about my friends, but I do not have that kind of thing.

'Think for' should be 'think about'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I have not that type of thing' is awkward; 'I do not have that kind of thing' is better.

× Absolutely yes Sir, That singing makes people happy.

✓ Absolutely yes, Sir. Singing makes people happy.

'That singing makes people happy' is awkward; 'Singing makes people happy' is clearer. Also, a comma after 'yes' and a period after 'Sir' improve clarity.

× If I got bored or getting stressed then every time I listen music and sing the music for my relaxation and my uh, good mood.

✓ If I get bored or stressed, I always listen to music and sing for my relaxation and good mood.

'If I got bored' should be 'If I get bored' to match the present tense conditional. 'Every time' is better replaced with 'always' for naturalness. 'Listen music' needs the preposition 'to' as 'listen to music'. 'Sing the music' is better as 'sing' or 'sing along' without 'the music'. 'My uh, good mood' should be 'good mood' without hesitation sounds.