Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문장이 다소 중복되고 연결어 사용이 부족합니다. 좀 더 명확한 주제문과 구체적인 이유를 연결어와 함께 사용하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. Although I'm not very good at it, singing alone allows me to express my feelings freely, which makes me feel joyful.

Sugestão: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 답변을 구성하세요. 또한, 구체적인 경험을 더해 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

Exemplo: I haven't learned singing from a professional, but my father, who is in a band, taught me some techniques. Also, I watch YouTube videos to improve my pronunciation. If I have the chance, I would like to take formal singing lessons.

Sugestão: 답변이 짧고 구체성이 부족합니다. 주제문을 명확히 하고, 이유와 계획을 연결어로 자연스럽게 연결하여 답변을 확장하세요.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my boyfriend because it would make him happy. Therefore, I plan to practice regularly and improve my singing skills to perform well for him.

Sugestão: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 명확한 주제문과 구체적인 이유를 연결어와 함께 사용하여 완성도 높은 답변을 만드세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people relieve stress and forget their worries. Moreover, singing allows them to enjoy the present moment and feel more relaxed.

× I haven't learn how to sing to an expert but my daddy's in a band so he sings well.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing from an expert but my daddy's in a band so he sings well.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' after 'haven't' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× I haven't learn how to sing to an expert but my daddy's in a band so he sings well.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing from an expert but my daddy's in a band so he sings well.

The correct preposition to indicate the source of learning is 'from' not 'to'.

× But if I have a chance I want to learn to.

✓ But if I have a chance, I want to learn too.

The word 'to' is incorrectly used instead of 'too' which means 'also' in this context.

× I can search on the on the YouTube how to sing or how to pronounce or something.

✓ I can search on YouTube how to sing or how to pronounce or something.

The phrase 'on the YouTube' is incorrect; 'YouTube' is a proper noun and does not require the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people singing a song they can relive their stress and also they can forget their anxiety.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing a song they can relieve their stress and also they can forget their anxiety.

The verb 'singing' should be 'sing' to agree with the plural subject 'people' and to form the correct verb tense here.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people singing a song they can relive their stress and also they can forget their anxiety.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing a song they can relieve their stress and also they can forget their anxiety.

The verb 'relive' is incorrect; the correct word is 'relieve' meaning to reduce stress.