Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite detailed and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it runs in my family. Many of my ancestors were known for their beautiful voices, and their passion for singing has been passed down through generations. Therefore, growing up in such an inspiring environment naturally encouraged me to develop my own singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your sentences properly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your learning experience.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing mainly from my parents and my aunt, who taught me various singing techniques. When I was young, I used to attend music lessons with them. Additionally, some of my uncles and aunties are music teachers, so they often took me along to their classes, which helped me improve.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: I want to sing for many people, especially the people in my village. When I was a child, I often dreamed of performing in front of them. Moreover, I used to practice a lot because I hope to sing for them someday.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains incomplete ideas. Try to directly address the question about singing bringing happiness, and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I was a child, I dreamed of singing in front of a large audience, especially my fellow villagers. I practiced every day because I wanted to share my passion and make them happy through my performance.

× I love singing because it's runs in my family.

✓ I love singing because it runs in my family.

The phrase 'it's runs' incorrectly combines 'it is' with the verb 'runs'. The correct form is 'it runs' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× their passion for singing has been passed down through generations to generation.

✓ their passion for singing has been passed down through generations to generations.

The phrase 'generations to generation' is inconsistent in number. Both should be plural 'generations' to indicate the passage through multiple generations.

× my aunt who taught me very singing techniques.

✓ my aunt who taught me many singing techniques.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly used to modify 'singing techniques'. The correct quantifier is 'many' for countable nouns like 'techniques'.

× When I was young I used to attend music lessons with them and since some of my uncles and aunties there's music teacher, they often took me along to their classes which.

✓ When I was young, I used to attend music lessons with them, and since some of my uncles and aunties were music teachers, they often took me along to their classes.

The sentence is fragmented and contains grammatical errors. 'there's music teacher' should be 'were music teachers' to agree in number and tense. The relative clause 'which' is incomplete and unnecessary here.

× When I was a child, I usually dream of singing in front of many people, especially in my with in front of my village people.

✓ When I was a child, I usually dreamed of singing in front of many people, especially in front of my village people.

The verb 'dream' should be in past tense 'dreamed' to match the past time frame. The phrase 'in my with in front of' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'in front of'.

× Moreover, I used to practice a lot and someday I think I will sing.

✓ Moreover, I used to practice a lot and someday I think I will sing on stage.

The sentence is incomplete and vague. Adding 'on stage' clarifies the future intention of singing publicly.

× When I was a child, I often dreamt of singing in front of large audience, especially my fellow villagers.

✓ When I was a child, I often dreamt of singing in front of a large audience, especially my fellow villagers.

The noun 'audience' is singular and requires the article 'a' before it.

× I used to practice singing everyday because I wanted to share my passion with them and make them happy.

✓ I used to practice singing every day because I wanted to share my passion with them and make them happy.

The word 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'. The correct adverbial phrase is 'every day' meaning 'each day'.

× I still hope that one day I will have the chance to perform for many people and express muse myself through.

✓ I still hope that one day I will have the chance to perform for many people and express myself through music.

The phrase 'express muse myself through' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct phrase is 'express myself through music' to convey the intended meaning.