Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question first, then give a clear reason with specific details. Avoid repeating words and keep your sentences concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I am alone in my bathroom. It feels comfortable and private, so I can practice singing my favourite songs without any distractions.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about what you learnt.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt how to sing at school from my music teacher. Additionally, I participate in cultural singing activities where I have learned traditional songs and improved my singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer shows emotion but is a bit confusing and repetitive. Try to organise your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use simpler expressions to convey your feelings naturally.

Exemplo: I like to sing for my community because I am proud of them. Moreover, I enjoy singing for my parents as a way to show my love and gratitude for everything they have done for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness to many people because it allows them to express their feelings. However, some people may find joy in other activities like sports, depending on their interests.

× Do you like singing? Yes. So being a bathroom singer, I usually like singing because I have some lyrics.

✓ Do you like singing? Yes. So, being a bathroom singer, I usually like to sing because I know some lyrics.

The phrase 'like singing' is correct, but 'I have some lyrics' is incorrect because 'have' is not the right verb to express knowing lyrics. Instead, 'I know some lyrics' is appropriate. Also, 'like singing' can be replaced with 'like to sing' for better clarity in this context.

× I usually try it in my bathroom and because in that space I feel alone and and I have lots of lyrics in bathroom.

✓ I usually try it in my bathroom because in that space I feel alone and I know lots of lyrics in the bathroom.

The phrase 'in bathroom' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'try it' is vague; it is better to say 'I usually sing in my bathroom'. The repetition of 'and' is a mistake and should be corrected.

× Basically, in my school education, a school teacher taught us how to sing.

✓ Basically, during my school education, a school teacher taught us how to sing.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'in my school education' is awkward. 'During my school education' is more natural. The past tense 'taught' is correctly used here.

× Because I take cultural singing activity, I take part in cultural singing activities, and I usually learn cultural music and cultural songs also.

✓ Because I take part in cultural singing activities, I usually learn cultural music and cultural songs as well.

The phrase 'I take cultural singing activity' is incorrect; it should be 'I take part in cultural singing activities' to correctly express participation in plural activities.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

The correct object pronoun after a preposition is 'whom' rather than 'who'. However, in spoken English, 'who' is often used informally.

× To be honest, I think for my land and and my community because my community makes me very proud and I love my community so much.

✓ To be honest, I think of my land and my community because my community makes me very proud and I love it so much.

The phrase 'think for my land' is incorrect; it should be 'think of my land'. Also, the repetition of 'and' is an error. Replacing 'I love my community so much' with 'I love it so much' avoids repetition.

× And rather than I usually prefer to sing for my for my mother and father because they give birth, they give me birth and their idol for me.

✓ And I usually prefer to sing for my mother and father because they gave me birth and are idols for me.

The phrase 'they give birth, they give me birth' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'they gave me birth'. Also, 'their idol for me' is incorrect; it should be 'are idols for me'.

× So it is a such type of gift for them whenever I sing for them.

✓ So, it is a special kind of gift for them whenever I sing for them.

The phrase 'a such type of gift' is incorrect; it should be 'a special kind of gift'. The sentence structure is improved by adding a comma after 'So'.

× According to me people have different mindsets and they have different admirable things.

✓ According to me, people have different mindsets and they admire different things.

The phrase 'different admirable things' is incorrect; 'admirable' is an adjective, but the intended meaning is that people admire different things, so 'admire' as a verb is appropriate.

× Those who have singing is admire thing and they definitely choose singing but someone have to love play.

✓ Those who have singing as an admired thing definitely choose singing, but someone who loves to play...

The phrase 'singing is admire thing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing as an admired thing'. Also, 'someone have to love play' is incorrect; it should be 'someone who loves to play'.

× Someone have love in sports then they definitely choose sports.

✓ Someone who loves sports definitely chooses sports.

The phrase 'someone have love in sports' is incorrect; it should be 'someone who loves sports'. Also, subject-verb agreement requires 'chooses' for 'someone'.

× So it's depends on the people situation but.

✓ So, it depends on the people's situation.

The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect; it should be 'it depends'. Also, 'people situation' should be 'people's situation' to show possession. The sentence should not end with 'but' without continuation.