Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper verb tenses and avoiding redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, instead of saying "I don't really participated," say "I didn't really participate."

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing and often listen to music in my free time. However, I didn't participate in singing classes or choirs as a child because I felt my voice wasn't very good. As a result, my passion for singing has somewhat faded over time.

Sugestão: Improve fluency by avoiding filler words like "uh" and repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to be more specific about your experience and feelings.

Exemplo: I have tried learning to sing through various YouTube tutorials, but it was challenging without direct feedback from a teacher. Since I wasn't confident about my voice, I never joined any in-person singing classes.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases like "for me."

Exemplo: My mom and grandmother used to sing lullabies to help me fall asleep. If I ever become confident enough to sing in public, I would first perform for my parents and close family members.

Sugestão: Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to express your opinion. Avoid awkward phrasing like "do not really keen on."

Exemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness to those who are passionate about it. However, for people who don't enjoy singing, it might not be as enjoyable.

× I don't really participated in different classes, orchestras as a kid.

✓ I didn't really participate in different classes, orchestras as a kid.

The verb 'participated' is incorrectly used in the past participle form here. After 'did not', the base form of the verb should be used. Therefore, 'participated' should be corrected to 'participate'.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense and past participle form of 'learn'. In Canadian English, 'learned' is more commonly used. Both are correct, but 'learned' fits better in Canadian English context.

× I never participated in a in a in person class.

✓ I never participated in an in-person class.

The phrase 'in a in a in person class' contains repetition and incorrect article usage. 'In-person' is a compound adjective and requires the article 'an' before it because 'in' starts with a vowel sound. The repetition should be removed for clarity.

× My mom and my grandmother always used to sing to me different lullabies for me to fall asleep.

✓ My mom and my grandmother always used to sing me different lullabies to help me fall asleep.

The phrase 'sing to me different lullabies for me to fall asleep' is awkward. The verb 'sing' can take an indirect object without 'to' (sing me). Also, 'for me to fall asleep' is better expressed as 'to help me fall asleep' for clarity and naturalness.

× If I ever decided to sing to someone and be confident enough in my words to be able to perform my voice in public, I would first do it with my parents and family members.

✓ If I ever decided to sing to someone and be confident enough in my ability to perform my voice in public, I would first do it with my parents and family members.

The phrase 'confident enough in my words' is incorrect because 'words' does not convey the intended meaning. It should be 'confident enough in my ability' to express confidence in singing. This improves clarity and correctness.

× Some people do not really keen on singing so it would not be much enjoyable for people that don't like singing.

✓ Some people are not really keen on singing, so it would not be very enjoyable for people who don't like singing.

The phrase 'do not really keen' is incorrect; the verb 'are' is needed ('are keen'). Also, 'much enjoyable' is incorrect; 'very enjoyable' is the correct adverb-adjective combination. 'That' should be replaced with 'who' when referring to people.