Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "Yes, I definitely like singing because it helps me improve my pronunciation and speaking skills."

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely like singing because it helps me improve my pronunciation and speaking skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, correct the grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, "Yes, I learned how to sing in my 10th standard when I took a music subject that included a project on three instruments."

Exemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing in my 10th standard when I took a music subject that included a project on three instruments.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to be more natural and concise. Use linking words to explain your reasons. For example, "I usually prefer not to sing for others; instead, I sing for my own enjoyment and to relax my mind."

Exemplo: I usually prefer not to sing for others; instead, I sing for my own enjoyment and to relax my mind.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. For example, "Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because there are many types of music that people enjoy, which can uplift their mood and improve their lives."

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because there are many types of music that people enjoy, which can uplift their mood and improve their lives.

× I like singing because by singing I able to enhance my pronunciation level and increase my speaking.

✓ I like singing because by singing I am able to enhance my pronunciation level and improve my speaking.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before 'able' to form the correct present continuous structure 'I am able'. Also, 'increase my speaking' is incorrect; 'improve my speaking' is more appropriate as 'speaking' is a skill, not a quantity to increase.

× I learned about how to sing in my 10th standard because in my 10th standard there is a subject of music and I learn about the singing, which is a project of three instruments.

✓ I learned how to sing in my 10th standard because in my 10th standard there was a subject of music and I learned about singing, which is a project involving three instruments.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'There is' should be 'there was' to match past tense context. 'I learn' should be 'I learned' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'about how to sing' is better as 'how to sing' and 'about the singing' as 'about singing'. The phrase 'a project of three instruments' is better expressed as 'a project involving three instruments'.

× I do not prefer to sing for anyone, but usually I like to singing a music for my time pass or providing relaxation to my mindset.

✓ I do not prefer to sing for anyone, but usually I like singing music for my pastime or to provide relaxation to my mind.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to', so 'like to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing'. 'A music' is incorrect because 'music' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'Time pass' is an Indian English expression; 'pastime' is more standard. 'Providing relaxation to my mindset' is better expressed as 'to provide relaxation to my mind'.

× Yes, singing bring happiness to people by providing a lot of varieties.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to people by providing a lot of variety.

'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'brings' not 'bring'. Also, 'a lot of varieties' is incorrect; 'variety' is uncountable here and should be singular.

× There are different type of music which is liked by people which makes individual life happy by changing their mind.

✓ There are different types of music which are liked by people and which make individual lives happy by changing their minds.

'Type' should be plural 'types' to agree with 'different'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'types'. 'Individual life' should be plural 'individual lives' to match 'people'. 'Their mind' should be 'their minds' to agree with plural subject.