Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it refreshes me and helps express my emotions creatively, especially when I'm stressed or happy.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned singing at an after-school academy because I was considering applying for a university major in singing, which helped improve my skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I want to sing for people I love because I find it hard to express my emotions in daily conversations, so singing helps me communicate better.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but some grammar errors and redundancy. Use linking words properly and check verb agreement to make your answer more natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. For example, when I feel stressed about school grades, singing uplifting songs helps me relax and improves my mood.

× Yes, I learned how to sing and after school Academy because I was considering to apply for university in singing major and it was a lot.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing at an after-school academy because I was considering applying for university with a major in singing, and it was a a lot.

The original sentence has several issues: 'and after school Academy' lacks a preposition and article; 'considering to apply' is incorrect verb form; 'in singing major' is incorrect preposition and word order; 'it was a lot' is unclear. Corrected sentence uses 'at an after-school academy' (preposition and article), 'considering applying' (correct verb form after 'consider'), 'with a major in singing' (correct preposition and word order), and clarifies 'it was a lot' to 'and it was a lot' (though this phrase is still vague, it is kept as in original). Suggestions: Use correct prepositions and verb forms after verbs like 'consider'. Use articles before singular nouns. Maintain clear sentence structure.

× Yes, I learned how to sing and after school Academy because I was considering to apply for university in singing major and it was a lot.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing at an after-school academy because I was considering applying for university with a major in singing, and it was a lot.

The phrase 'and after school Academy' is missing the preposition 'at' and the article 'an' before 'after-school academy'. Also, 'in singing major' should be 'with a major in singing' to correctly express the field of study. Prepositions are important to show relationships between words. Suggestions: Use 'at' for locations and 'with a major in' to specify academic focus.

× Yes, I learned how to sing and after school Academy because I was considering to apply for university in singing major and it was a lot.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing at an after-school academy because I was considering applying for university with a major in singing, and it was a lot.

After the verb 'considering', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, not the infinitive 'to apply'. This is a common verb pattern in English. Suggestion: Use 'considering applying' instead of 'considering to apply'.

× I want to sing for some people who I really love because I'm not really good at express my emotions in everyday conversation.

✓ I want to sing for some people whom I really love because I'm not really good at expressing my emotions in everyday conversation.

The relative pronoun 'who' should be 'whom' as it is the object of the verb 'love'. Also, after 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('expressing'). Suggestions: Use 'whom' for objects in relative clauses and use '-ing' form after prepositions like 'at'.

× I want to sing for some people who I really love because I'm not really good at express my emotions in everyday conversation.

✓ I want to sing for some people whom I really love because I'm not really good at expressing my emotions in everyday conversation.

After the phrase 'good at', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing'. 'Good at express' is incorrect; it should be 'good at expressing'. Suggestion: Use gerund form after prepositions.

× So instead of just talking directly, I prefer to sing for them and it makes express my emotion better.

✓ So instead of just talking directly, I prefer to sing for them because it helps me express my emotions better.

The original sentence 'it makes express my emotion better' is ungrammatical. The verb 'makes' should be followed by an object and an infinitive or gerund, but here it is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'because it helps me express my emotions better' to clearly express the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use correct verb patterns and conjunctions to connect ideas clearly.

× For example, from my personal experience and I feel stressed about my school grades.

✓ For example, from my personal experience, I felt stressed about my school grades.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains an unnecessary conjunction 'and' that breaks the sentence. Also, tense should be past to match 'felt stressed'. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary conjunctions and ensure sentence completeness.

× Singing and uplifting songs helped me relax and improves my moods.

✓ Singing and uplifting songs helped me relax and improved my moods.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense 'improves'. Both verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency. Suggestion: Use consistent verb tenses in a sentence.

× It allow allows me to express my emotions.

✓ It allows me to express my emotions.

There is a duplication 'allow allows'. The correct form is 'allows' for third person singular present tense. Suggestion: Use correct third person singular verb form without duplication.