Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'I like singing' and 'it is my hobby to sing'. Also, use present tense consistently and add linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially Punjabi songs, which I often sing alone at home in my free time because it relaxes me.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using past tense consistently and making the sentence more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing at school during a special music period designed for students who love music and want to improve their singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent with linking words.

Exemplo: I haven't sung for anyone yet, but if I get the chance, I would definitely like to sing for my mother and father because they mean a lot to me.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid vague phrases like 'good event or things to do'.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because many people enjoy it, and it helps refresh the mind, making it a wonderful activity to relax and feel joyful.

× Why yes, I like singing and in my free time I used to sing Punjabi songs because it is my hobby to sing whenever I am alone at my home.

✓ Why yes, I like singing and in my free time I sing Punjabi songs because it is my hobby to sing whenever I am alone at my home.

The phrase 'used to sing' implies a past habit that no longer continues. Since the student is talking about a current hobby, the simple present tense 'sing' is appropriate here to indicate a present habitual action.

× Yes, in my school I have learned how to sing because there is a specific music period for children who are fond of music and want to sing.

✓ Yes, in my school I learned how to sing because there was a specific music period for children who were fond of music and wanted to sing.

The student is referring to a past event (learning to sing in school), so the past tense 'learned', 'was', 'were', and 'wanted' should be used instead of present perfect and present tense to maintain consistency in the past narrative.

× Till now I have not seen for anyone but if get I will get an opportunity of singing for someone, I will definitely sing for my mother and father.

✓ Till now I have not sung for anyone, but if I get an opportunity to sing for someone, I will definitely sing for my mother and father.

The original sentence has incorrect verb usage and word order. 'Seen for anyone' is incorrect; it should be 'sung for anyone'. Also, 'if get I will get' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if I get'. The phrase 'opportunity of singing' should be 'opportunity to sing'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have seen many people that they enjoy singing and singing make their mind fresh and I think it is a good event or things to do.

✓ Yes, I have seen many people who enjoy singing, and singing makes their minds fresh. I think it is a good activity to do.

The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people. 'Singing make' should be 'singing makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds' because it refers to many people. 'Event or things' is incorrect; 'activity' is a better choice here for clarity and correctness.