Singing— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I really enjoy singing because it gives me great pleasure and I became more relaxed when I sing. Also, I really love singing with my friends when we hang out and we usually go to karaoke bars together.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, I haven't, uh, participated in, uh, some lessons of singing, but actually I tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it didn't work well. So I think that I would like to.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I'm not really sure, but I would like to sing for myself because singing gives me great pleasure and it helps me to become more calm and confident.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
In fact, I would like to think so, because umm, nowadays singing is like mental therapy for a lot of people. So for me. That's why I'm thinking that, yes.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более естественным и избегать повторений. Например, вместо "I became more relaxed when I sing" лучше сказать "I feel more relaxed when I sing". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.
Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it brings me great pleasure and helps me feel more relaxed. Moreover, I love singing with my friends when we hang out, and we often go to karaoke bars together.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Следует избегать слов-паразитов и строить предложения более плавно и логично.
Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any formal singing lessons, but I have tried to learn by myself at home. However, it was not very effective, so I would like to take professional lessons in the future.
Who do you want to sing for?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Ответ можно сделать более структурированным и связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторений.
Exemplo: I'm not exactly sure, but I would like to sing for myself because it brings me great pleasure. Additionally, singing helps me feel calmer and more confident.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Следует использовать более уверенные формулировки и связные предложения.
Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because nowadays it serves as a form of mental therapy for many. For me personally, singing always lifts my mood and reduces stress.
Gramática
× I really enjoy singing because it gives me great pleasure and I became more relaxed when I sing.
✓ I really enjoy singing because it gives me great pleasure and I become more relaxed when I sing.
The verb 'became' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a general truth or habitual action, so the present tense 'become' should be used instead.
× No, I haven't, uh, participated in, uh, some lessons of singing, but actually I tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it didn't work well.
✓ No, I haven't participated in any singing lessons, but actually I have tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it hasn't worked well.
The present perfect tense 'haven't participated' is correct for an action not done up to now. 'Tried' should be in present perfect 'have tried' to indicate an experience up to now. 'Didn't work' should be 'hasn't worked' to maintain present relevance.
× No, I haven't, uh, participated in, uh, some lessons of singing, but actually I tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it didn't work well.
✓ No, I haven't participated in any singing lessons, but actually I have tried to learn it by myself at home, but to be honest, it hasn't worked well.
The phrase 'lessons of singing' is unnatural; the correct preposition is 'singing lessons'. Also, 'some' is less appropriate than 'any' in negative sentences.
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