Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors. For example, instead of repeating 'I sing' multiple times, you can say 'I usually sing loudly at home, especially in the shower, which helps me relieve stress and calm my nerves.'

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing, although I'm not a trained singer. I usually sing loudly at home, especially in the shower, because it helps me relieve stress and calm my nerves.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by correcting minor grammar mistakes. Also, try to be more specific about your experience. For example, you can say 'Although I never formally learned singing, I attended mandatory singing classes at school in India, but I struggled with classical singing.'

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learned singing, but I attended mandatory singing classes at school in India. However, I was always bad at classical singing.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I would' and 'you know'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise. For example, 'I would love to sing for my girlfriend, but currently, I mostly sing to myself in the shower, expressing my thoughts without worrying about the lyrics.'

Exemplo: I would love to sing for my girlfriend, but these days, I mostly sing to myself in the shower, expressing my thoughts without worrying about the lyrics.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and 'you see'. For example, 'Yes, singing definitely brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings more effectively than conversation. Moreover, many songs today have meaningful lyrics that convey the artist's message clearly.'

Exemplo: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings more effectively than conversation. Moreover, many songs today have meaningful lyrics that convey the artist's message clearly.

× Yes, I love singing but I'm not a trained singer or a very good at singing.

✓ Yes, I love singing but I'm not a trained singer or very good at singing.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'very good' because 'good' is an adjective here, not a noun. We should say 'very good' without 'a'.

× Or I usually I am a bathroom singer, you know I sing when I am at shower.

✓ Or I usually am a bathroom singer, you know I sing when I am in the shower.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'shower'; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being inside the shower. Also, the phrase 'Or I usually I am' has a redundant 'I'.

× No, I have not learned singing, but I did have classes when I was at school.

✓ No, I have not learned singing, but I did have classes when I was in school.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'school' in this context; 'in school' is the correct phrase to indicate attending school during a period of time.

× Usually in India we do have singing classes as well as dancing classes, so it was more of a mandatory class that we need to attend.

✓ Usually in India we do have singing classes as well as dancing classes, so it was more of a mandatory class that we had to attend.

The phrase 'need to attend' is present tense, but the context is past ('was more of a mandatory class'), so 'had to attend' is the correct past tense modal expression.

× I would say I would love to sing for my girlfriend or right now I would sing to myself.

✓ I would say I would love to sing for my girlfriend, or right now I would sing to myself.

A comma is needed before 'or' to separate the two independent clauses for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× That's what I do these days, you know, I just go home, take a shower, sing in the shower, expressing my own thoughts, not minding whether the lyrics are correct or not.

✓ That's what I do these days, you know, I just go home, take a shower, sing in the shower, express my own thoughts, not minding whether the lyrics are correct or not.

The verb 'expressing' should be in base form 'express' to maintain parallel structure with the other verbs in the list ('go', 'take', 'sing').

× You see, most of the songs these days have meaningful lyrics, which particularly tells what the artist wants to convey the message to us.

✓ You see, most of the songs these days have meaningful lyrics, which particularly tell what the artist wants to convey to us.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'lyrics' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'tell' instead of singular 'tells'. Also, 'convey the message to us' is redundant; 'convey to us' is sufficient.