Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and introduces an interesting point about mental health, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid overly formal phrases like 'this has been shown by studies' in speaking, and try to express your feelings more personally. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. In fact, singing can improve mental health by reducing stress and making people feel happier.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To improve, you could add a linking phrase and a bit more detail about why you want formal training, making your response more engaging and natural.

Exemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but I hope to get formal training someday because I want to improve my skills and sing confidently in front of others.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and fluent. Avoid awkward phrases like 'the closest of mine' and use linking words to explain your reason more clearly. Also, try to combine sentences to avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my best friend because she means a lot to me, and singing is a way to show my appreciation for her support.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes supporting details, but it is a bit repetitive with 'people' and 'friends'. Try to use synonyms and linking words to make your answer more varied and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people connect with others and share their emotions, which strengthens friendships and creates joyful experiences.

× I do like singing because it allows me to express my emotion and this has been shown by studies to be contributive to people's mental health.

✓ I do like singing because it allows me to express my emotions and this has been shown by studies to be contributive to people's mental health.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to multiple feelings in general, not a single emotion. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about expressing feelings broadly.

× She is the closest of mine and I do want to show appreciation.

✓ She is the closest to me and I do want to show appreciation.

The phrase 'closest of mine' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'closest to me' to indicate the person who is nearest or dearest. 'Of mine' is not used with 'closest' in this context.