Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有重复和犹豫词汇，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然流畅的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing when I'm alone, especially in the shower, because it helps me express my emotions and relax. However, I feel nervous singing in front of a large audience, which makes me stressed.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议理清句子结构，避免重复，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I consider singing just a hobby. I prefer to spend my money on traveling or other hobbies instead of singing lessons.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子不完整，建议使用完整句子表达，避免重复，并增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my parents because they are very supportive and encouraging. No matter how well I perform, they never laugh at me, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但有重复和犹豫词，建议减少填充词，使用更准确的词汇，并适当扩展细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions through melodies. It is also an effective way to relieve stress and improve mood.

× But if I take, if I say in front of the public a huge huge amount of people, I feel nervous which make me stressed out.

✓ But if I sing in front of a huge amount of people, I feel nervous which makes me stressed out.

主语是单数（which指代feeling nervous），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes。

× So I have never learned that seeing is just a hobby.

✓ So I have never learned that singing is just a hobby.

原句中'seeing'应为'singing'，这里是词汇错误，不属于语法错误，故不改。

× So I have never learned that seeing is just a hobby.

✓ So I have never learned that singing is just a hobby.

原句中'seeing'应为'singing'，这里是词汇错误，不属于语法错误，故不改。

× So I instead of spending some money saying I would like to spend money on traveling or other my favorite hobby.

✓ So instead of spending money on singing, I would like to spend money on traveling or other hobbies I like.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，需调整语序使句子完整通顺。

× Well, I will definitely want to sing for my parents because they are per umm supportive and encouraging.

✓ Well, I definitely want to sing for my parents because they are very supportive and encouraging.

'per'应为'very'，属于词汇错误，不属于语法错误，故不改。

× No matter how badly I perform, they will never laugh at me and which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed to see of course.

✓ No matter how badly I perform, they will never laugh at me, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, of course.

关系代词which指代前面的整个句子，谓语动词应为makes，且句子需加逗号分隔。

× So sing for them allows allows me to.

✓ So singing for them allows me to relax.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because seeing is kind of expression, umm, with, uh, with tunes, with emotion, with emotions.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a kind of expression with tunes and emotions.

'seeing'应为'singing'，属于词汇错误，不属于语法错误，故不改。