Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar bar use kora hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke aro natural ebong shothik vabe express korte. Apnar answer e linking words use koren jate answer ta logical hoy. Apni chesta korun 5 sentence er moddhe shothik vabe express korte.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing. Whenever I have free time and nothing to do, I like to sing songs. I also play the guitar, which makes singing more enjoyable. I find that singing helps refresh my mind and relax me after a long day.

Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar bar use kora hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe express korte. Apni linking words use koren jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apni teacher er naam niye confusion chhara shothik vabe bolun.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned music when I was a child. I have a harmonium at home, and I enjoy playing it. My music teacher's name was Nazrul, and I learned a lot of songs and techniques from him.

Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun uttor ta shothik vabe express korte, ar linking words use korte jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apni specific details add korte paren jemon kake apni gaan gaben ba keno gaan gaben.

Exemplo: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax and release tension. When I have free time, I like to listen to music and sing along. Singing is a refreshing way for me to spend my leisure time.

Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar bar use kora hoyeche. Apni chesta korun uttor ta shothik vabe express korte, ar linking words use korte jate uttor ta logical hoy. Apni specific example dite paren kibhabe gaan shunte ba gaan gaite manush khushi hoy.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Some enjoy singing, while others love listening to music. For example, when people feel bored or tired, listening to music can help them relax and feel joyful.

× I like to play with a guitar and sing a song and I think it's refresh my mind, relax, both.

✓ I like to play the guitar and sing a song and I think it refreshes my mind and relaxes me both.

The verbs 'refresh' and 'relax' need to be in the third person singular present tense form 'refreshes' and 'relaxes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'play with a guitar' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'play the guitar'.

× Yes, I learned music when I was child.

✓ Yes, I learned music when I was a child.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. 'Child' is a singular countable noun and requires an article here.

× The teacher, his name was Nazrul, he's my, she's my music music teacher.

✓ The teacher's name was Nazrul; he was my music teacher.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes pronouns 'he's' and 'she's' and uses possessive incorrectly. The corrected sentence uses the possessive form 'teacher's name' and consistent pronouns.

× I actually think for myself, I think it relax my mind, release the tension and when I have nothing to do I try to listen music and singing a lot.

✓ I actually think for myself, I think it relaxes my mind, releases the tension and when I have nothing to do I try to listen to music and sing a lot.

The verbs 'relax' and 'release' need to be in third person singular present tense 'relaxes' and 'releases' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'listen music' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'listen to music'. 'Singing' should be 'sing' to match the verb 'try to'.

× Some people like to sing and some people they they love to listening music.

✓ Some people like to sing and some people love listening to music.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant and repeated. Also, 'love to listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'love listening to music'.

× I think when people are bored and danced they must listen music.

✓ I think when people are bored and tired they must listen to music.

The word 'danced' is incorrect in this context; likely intended word is 'tired'. Also, 'listen music' should be 'listen to music'.

× It release the tension and make everyone feel relaxed.

✓ It releases the tension and makes everyone feel relaxed.

The verbs 'release' and 'make' need to be in third person singular present tense 'releases' and 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.