Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên chia câu thành các phần nhỏ hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and improve my mood after a hard day's work. When I was young, I dreamed of becoming a singer, but I chose a different path in life.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'come to official class'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn luyện tập.

Exemplo: I am an introverted person, so I have never attended official singing classes. However, I often practice singing by myself in front of a mirror, which I find very helpful, especially when I travel.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'not enough confident' nên là 'not confident enough'. Hãy chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my boyfriend because he is a big fan of music. However, I am not confident enough to sing for him yet, so I plan to practice more to improve my skills in the future.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'Singing don't' nên là 'Singing doesn't'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: I believe singing doesn't just bring happiness to people; it actually creates it. When we sing, we open our minds and souls, expressing our feelings and releasing stress and boredom.

× Singing is a good way to balance my mood after a hard working time Yes I do love singing and when I was young I had a dream that to become a singer but there's some another way in life but I.

✓ Singing is a good way to balance my mood after a hard working time. Yes, I do love singing and when I was young I had a dream to become a singer but there was another way in life for me.

The sentence contains incorrect past tense usage and awkward phrasing. 'There's some another way' should be 'there was another way' to match past tense. Also, 'that to become a singer' is incorrect; it should be 'to become a singer'. The sentence is long and run-on; it needs punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× I'm an introvert person so I have never come to official class about practicing but I always stand in front of my mirror and practice by myself.

✓ I'm an introverted person so I have never attended an official class for practicing but I always stand in front of my mirror and practice by myself.

The phrase 'come to official class about practicing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'attended an official class for practicing'. Also, 'introvert person' should be 'introverted person' (adjective form).

× I want to sing for my boyfriend because he's a big fan of music and but I'm not enough confident to sing for him and I will practice more and more to have the ability to sing for him in the future.

✓ I want to sing for my boyfriend because he's a big fan of music, but I'm not confident enough to sing for him yet, and I will practice more and more to have the ability to sing for him in the future.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'and but' together, which is redundant. Also, 'not enough confident' should be 'not confident enough'. The sentence needs commas to separate clauses properly.

× Singing don't bring happiness to people but create it.

✓ Singing doesn't bring happiness to people but creates it.

The subject 'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, the verbs should agree in number: 'bring' should be 'brings' or 'creates' should be singular 'creates'. Here, 'doesn't bring' and 'creates' is correct.

× When we singing, we open our mind, our soul and express to push out everything inside her, inside our hearts that make us feel stressed and bored.

✓ When we sing, we open our minds, our souls and express ourselves to push out everything inside us, inside our hearts that makes us feel stressed and bored.

'When we singing' should be 'When we sing' (correct verb form). 'Mind' and 'soul' should be plural to match 'we'. 'Express to push out' is incorrect; it should be 'express ourselves to push out'. 'Inside her' is incorrect pronoun; it should be 'inside us'. 'That make us' should be 'that makes us' to agree with singular 'everything'.