Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but needs clearer structure and grammar. Try to start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, avoid repeating similar feelings and fix sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because music helps me relax when I'm feeling down or stressed. Singing makes me feel stress-free and improves my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use proper grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I really want to, especially to learn how to hit high notes because many singers can sing amazing high notes, and I would like to try that too.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases. Make sure to directly answer the question and provide clear supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my family because singing for them makes me feel relieved and stress-free.

Sugestão: Your answer is short and somewhat repetitive. Try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music is delightful, and meaningful lyrics can inspire joy and positive emotions.

× musics always hits me and the singing is makes me stressfully stress free.

✓ music always hits me and singing makes me stressfully stress free.

The word 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, 'the singing is makes me' is incorrect; it should be 'singing makes me' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct verb form.

× the singing is makes me stressfully stress free.

✓ singing makes me stressfully stress free.

The phrase 'is makes' is incorrect because two verbs cannot be used together in this way. The correct form is 'singing makes me' where 'makes' is the verb and 'singing' is the subject in gerund form.

× No, I've never learned how to sing, but I really wanna learn how to sing, especially like how to hit high nose because the singers he like amazing high notes and I really wanna try to do that.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing, but I really want to learn how to sing, especially how to hit high notes because the singers like amazing high notes and I really want to try to do that.

The phrase 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. 'High nose' is incorrect; it should be 'high notes'. The phrase 'the singers he like' is incorrect; 'he' is unnecessary and 'like' should be 'like' as a verb referring to 'singers' plural subject. Also, 'wanna' should be 'want to' for clarity and correctness.

× the singers he like amazing high notes

✓ the singers like amazing high notes

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used here because 'singers' is plural and does not require a pronoun in this context. Removing 'he' corrects the sentence.

× I wanna Washington sing for me because every time I sing.

✓ I want someone to sing for me because every time I sing.

'Washington' is incorrectly used as a pronoun or noun here and does not fit the context. It should be replaced with 'someone' or a suitable pronoun to make sense.

× That's always for me, always for me to make feel like relieved or stress free.

✓ It's always for me, always to make me feel relieved or stress free.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. 'That's always for me' is vague; 'It's always for me' is clearer. Also, 'to make feel like relieved' is incorrect; it should be 'to make me feel relieved' to include the object pronoun 'me' and correct verb structure.

× Especially the music is very delightful and the lyrics had so much to do with that to make people happy or joy.

✓ Especially music is very delightful and the lyrics have so much to do with that to make people happy or joyful.

The definite article 'the' before 'music' is unnecessary because 'music' is used in a general sense. Also, 'had' should be 'have' to agree with the present tense context. 'Joy' should be 'joyful' to correctly modify the implied noun.