Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Instead of saying "one of my passion," say "one of my passions." Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it is one of my passions and it helps me feel calm and refreshed.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, use 'First,' 'Then,' and 'Finally' to describe the process.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was younger. First, my music teacher would sing a song and I would listen carefully. Then, she would ask me to sing the song, and I would try my best. Finally, she would correct my mistakes. It was a very good experience for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but needs better grammar and clarity. Use present tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, try to express your feelings more naturally.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mother because it has always been my dream to stand in front of her and sing a song.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs to be more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps us connect with their emotions and express our own feelings.

× Yes, I like singing because singing is one of my passion and it gives me a calm and refreshing mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing is one of my passions and it gives me a calm and refreshing mind.

The word 'passion' should be plural 'passions' because it is preceded by 'one of', which requires a plural noun after it.

× Yes, I had learned how to sing in my younger age.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my younger age.

The past perfect tense 'had learned' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a simple past event without a reference to another past event. Use simple past 'learned' instead.

× Yes, I had learned how to sing in my younger age.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing in my younger years.

The phrase 'in my younger age' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'in my younger years' to indicate a period in the past.

× It was a quite good experience where my music teacher will sing and I listen.

✓ It was quite a good experience where my music teacher would sing and I would listen.

The use of 'will' is incorrect when describing past habitual actions. The correct modal verb is 'would' to indicate repeated past actions.

× After that she will tell me to to sing that song.

✓ After that she would tell me to sing that song.

Similarly, 'will' should be replaced with 'would' to describe past habitual actions.

× Then I will sing and it was and she will rectify the mistake.

✓ Then I would sing and she would rectify the mistake.

Again, 'will' is incorrect for past habitual actions; 'would' is appropriate. Also, 'it was' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× It was a quite good experience for me.

✓ It was quite a good experience for me.

The phrase 'a quite good' is incorrect; the correct order is 'quite a good'.

× I want to sing for my mother and it was one of my dreams where my mother sit in front of me and I want to to stand in front of her and just sing a song for her.

✓ I want to sing for my mother and it is one of my dreams where my mother sits in front of me and I want to stand in front of her and just sing a song for her.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'It was' should be 'it is' to match 'I want'. Also, 'sit' should be 'sits' to agree with singular subject 'mother'. Duplicate 'to' is removed.

× I want to sing for my mother and it was one of my dreams where my mother sit in front of me and I want to to stand in front of her and just sing a song for her.

✓ I want to sing for my mother and it is one of my dreams where my mother sits in front of me and I want to stand in front of her and just sing a song to her.

The phrase 'sing a song for her' is acceptable but 'sing a song to her' is more natural when expressing the act of singing directed at someone.

× Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because if we sing we can connect to the emotions of of people and also we can make our emotions expressed that way singing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because if we sing we can connect to the emotions of people and also we can express our emotions; that way singing can bring happiness to people.

Duplicate 'of' is an error. Also, 'make our emotions expressed' is incorrect; it should be 'express our emotions' for proper verb usage.