Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, say 'singing makes me feel relaxed and warm' instead of 'makes me a relaxed and warmth.' Also, keep answers concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and warm. Although I'm not a professional singer, I enjoy singing loudly when I'm alone because it relieves my stress and makes me comfortable.

Sugestão: Focus on directly answering the question and avoid confusing or unrelated information. Use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would love to learn because I admire skilled singers.'

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would love to learn because I admire talented singers.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more organized by using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, say 'I enjoy singing melodious songs because they make me happy and refreshed. I especially like singing for my husband because he enjoys my music.'

Exemplo: I enjoy singing melodious songs because they make me happy and refreshed. I especially like singing for my husband because he enjoys listening to my music.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express various emotions depending on how they perform.'

Exemplo: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express various emotions depending on how they perform.

× I think singing makes me a relaxed and warmth.

✓ I think singing makes me relaxed and warm.

The words 'relaxed' and 'warm' are adjectives describing the state of the person. 'A relaxed and warmth' is incorrect because 'warmth' is a noun, not an adjective. Using 'relaxed' and 'warm' as adjectives correctly describes the feeling.

× It's a stressbuster for me.

✓ It's a stress buster for me.

The word 'stressbuster' is a compound noun and should be written as two words 'stress buster' or hyphenated. Also, 'a stress buster' is correct here as it refers to one thing that reduces stress.

× but uh, when I'm alone, I'm singing loudly.

✓ but uh, when I'm alone, I sing loudly.

The present continuous tense 'I'm singing' implies an action happening right now. However, the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'I sing' is more appropriate.

× No, I've never learned about how to swim, but I but I love to know how to sing and I love the skilled persons to the amazing singers.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing, but I love to learn how to sing and I love skilled people who are amazing singers.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'learned about how to swim' instead of 'learned how to sing'. Also, 'love to know' should be 'love to learn'. 'Skilled persons to the amazing singers' is unclear and corrected to 'skilled people who are amazing singers' for clarity and grammar.

× Actually I love to sing the melodious songs others more comfortable for me and also it's makes me so happy and also a refreshment for me and also my husband also love to hear my melodious music.

✓ Actually, I love to sing melodious songs; it makes me more comfortable, happy, and refreshed. Also, my husband loves to hear my melodious music.

The original sentence has pronoun and subject-verb agreement errors. 'Others more comfortable for me' is unclear and corrected to 'it makes me more comfortable'. 'It's makes' is incorrect; 'it makes' is correct. 'My husband also love' should be 'my husband loves' to agree with singular subject.

× Yes, of course, singing is also a way to express the happiness and also all emotions.

✓ Yes, of course, singing is also a way to express happiness and all emotions.

The article 'the' before 'happiness' is unnecessary because 'happiness' is an uncountable noun here. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Singing includes all emotions.

✓ Singing expresses all emotions.

The verb 'includes' is not the best choice here. 'Expresses' better conveys that singing conveys or shows emotions.

× It depends on the persons hmm and the way he they expressed.

✓ It depends on the person and the way he or she expresses them.

'Persons' should be singular 'person' here. Also, 'he they expressed' is incorrect; it should be 'he or she expresses' to agree in number and tense with the subject and to maintain clarity.