SingingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like singing? Why?

Candidato

Yes, As for me, seeing can be a really enjoyable thing to do in my leisure time and I definitely prefer singing when I'm free.

Examinador

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Candidato

Yes, I did, but finally gave up. It was in my junior high school and I really enjoyed spending my time there training, singing with my friends and teachers.

Examinador

Who do you want to sing for?

Candidato

Maybe myself because I found myself difficult to sing aloud in front of others, so instead of seeing it for others, I would definitely enjoy seeing myself.

Examinador

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Candidato

Yeah, definitely. I suggest that people nowadays can really gain positive emotions from singing songs, which is one of the most beneficial ways for people to relax themselves.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中出现了拼写错误(seeing 应为 singing),且表达不够自然,建议注意单词拼写和句子流畅性。可以简洁直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions during my free time.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答结构较好,但“finally gave up”表达略显消极,可以稍作解释原因,使内容更丰富。

Exemplo: Yes, I learned singing in junior high school and enjoyed practicing with my friends and teachers, but I eventually stopped because I was busy with other studies.

Who do you want to sing for?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中多次出现拼写错误(seeing 应为 singing),且表达不够清晰自然。建议简洁明了地表达害羞的原因,并使用连贯的句子。

Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel shy singing aloud in front of others.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答内容积极且结构合理,但用词可以更自然,避免使用“suggest”表达个人观点。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can help people feel happy and relaxed, making it a great way to relieve stress.

Gramática

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, As for me, seeing can be a really enjoyable thing to do in my leisure time and I definitely prefer singing when I'm free.

Yes, As for me, singing can be a really enjoyable thing to do in my leisure time and I definitely prefer singing when I'm free.

这里'seeing'是动名词形式,但语境中应使用'singing',因为问题是关于唱歌的。动名词用错导致句意不清。建议根据上下文选择正确的动名词。

Verb in the present participle form

× Maybe myself because I found myself difficult to sing aloud in front of others, so instead of seeing it for others, I would definitely enjoy seeing myself.

Maybe myself because I find it difficult to sing aloud in front of others, so instead of singing for others, I would definitely enjoy singing myself.

这里使用了过去时态'found',但语境应为现在时态,且'seeing'用错,应为'singing'。动词形式错误影响表达准确性。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用。

Vocabulário

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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